Through a Feather's Touch

taste the dust of past and present
the moments of life’s gifts and love lost
blowing gently in the atmosphere like ghost sounds in symphony
entering your home, blinding your eye, seeking your company
and remember me as I was seated at your couch
I’m visible to you now only through a feather’s touch

I plead for a full life in my youth
I pray for safety from danger and an early death
I will ruffle feathers whilst crows' eggs hatch
with the time I’m given fulfil a purpose like a burning match
squeeze life to the fullest out of this body until my last breath
knock down closed doors until opportunities comes forth

what I fear most about life is dying, and the smell
the flies and decomposition of flesh from bone and skull
I know I cannot go into the afterlife in this expired shell
and chances are I’ve sinned so much I’m closer in fact to hell
the thought of being consumed by maggots, let me tell...
compels me to go against culture and tradition and oh well

my shadow will remain in the back of your mind
when I wither away and follow my tears into the ground
this boat is sailing in rough seas on a toss, ‘heads or tails’
I can never steer it to turn around once it sets sail
my cremated ashes is all that I can wear
a final sunset for warmth I hold in odourless glassware

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/3/2015 7:42:00 AM
Your rhyme is so natural as to be almost invisible. Great job, Thabang, of expressing life's most engrossing questions.
Login to Reply
Ngoma Avatar
Thabang Ngoma
Date: 2/3/2015 1:06:00 PM
Hi Cona...thank you so much for the wonderful comment...rgds, Thabang
Date: 2/1/2015 6:21:00 PM
outstanding piece of writing thabang
Login to Reply
Ngoma Avatar
Thabang Ngoma
Date: 2/2/2015 7:08:00 AM
Hi Liam...thank you for taking the time to read and leave this comment - a huge complement...glad you enjoyed it...rgds, Thabang
Date: 2/1/2015 9:51:00 AM
Excellent!! A powerful piece of prose...very good, Thabang. :) john.
Login to Reply
Ngoma Avatar
Thabang Ngoma
Date: 2/2/2015 7:12:00 AM
Hi John...thanks for the wonderful comment...my poetry is a work in progress and with your support it's only getting better...rgds, Thabang
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter