Throbbing Time

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Flow with the stream, merging to the river gone awry. The vivid fantasy I'm invested in thwarting rhymes. The woodland, as foreseen, had no limit to the sky. Allow for beautiful breathing; I miss parts of my times. We're almost there with the Cupid of Love's spearhead. Though the flow of zest seems to be evident, it is not true. Shadow augurs the onset of first glow; the dawn show head Warm and peaceful, fond of the wet branches that pursue. Nature sighs softly as people join and those who yearn. The white silk robe was draped over the luscious foliage. I prefer to express my energy via harmony and yarn. Nature, not spoilage, gave valleys a vast range. Trees benefit our health by being alert, alive, and helpful. The combination of air, dew, and grass creates a sense of bliss. As a fervent believer and reaper, Praise the Sky entrust is vital. The natural landscape soothes me, and I can unwind in peace. The most thoughtful person who strives in the face of misfortune. Even though nature envelops vastness. Things have improved vastly now as the ego has been gone.  Heaven, bereft of time, reverberates with beautiful richness. God provides all we need; our hearts only want the finest. The contrast between land and sky creates a hybrid in nature. Let us sleep peacefully, enjoying the landscape at night. We wanted serenity, so we went back to the creator.
Written: May 25, 2021 All Yours (Jun 23) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 6/24/2021 10:01:00 AM
What a wonderful creation, Lasaad! This one really hits the high mark of creativity. Wonderful images and message. Congratulations my friend! Blessings.
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Date: 6/24/2021 1:01:00 AM
Great Work. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/27/2021 3:24:00 PM
I don’t know how I missed this one Lasaad, you have certainly hit time from so many directions here, integrating it an exceptionally worked out poem, of course my favourite line is, Creation has gone, time resets, and life is again back. I bid you all the best in the contest, cheers David
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Date: 5/27/2021 2:24:00 PM
Ah Time What we do with our time here is up to us. If we waste it our entire life and future is wasted if we use it wisely we will be rewarded. I always say, "Time Heals All Wounds and Wounds All Heels." A fine write my friend. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/27/2021 2:53:00 PM
Thanks for your supportive and kind words Judy, blessings and hugs
Date: 5/26/2021 5:29:00 PM
Fascinating presentation of time. Such a diversity of observation points, Lasaad! ~ gw
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Date: 5/26/2021 7:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend. I always look forward to your support.
Date: 5/26/2021 7:23:00 AM
deprived of time... yes... Heaven... there is only forever... time is such a funny thing... Love your write... beautiful. Ann
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Date: 5/26/2021 7:42:00 AM
Thanks, Ann, your kind words are so heartwarming; I'm so glad you like my write. Blessings and hugs.
Date: 5/25/2021 12:13:00 PM
A profound and well-developed presentation of time and its influence upon man's life, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Good luck with the contest. Blessings.
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Date: 5/25/2021 12:44:00 PM
I wish the same for you, dearest friend Demetrios. Thank you for your heartwarming support. Have a very nice evening
Date: 5/25/2021 12:11:00 PM
So many interesting ideas explored here, Lasaad. I enjoyed the fascinating references to time from differing angles. I loved the last line especially.
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Date: 5/25/2021 12:41:00 PM
Thank you for your precious visit and comment: my friend, Milton. Your feedback shed additional light on the theme of the poem. Blessings.
Date: 5/25/2021 10:45:00 AM
Truth entice bliss and harmony. Well written Lasaad, a deep poem to read and enjoy. Great verse.
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Date: 5/25/2021 12:45:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Victor. I appreciated your read and your fine comments
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