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Thrice Touched -

When Your eyes become moonstones
on the shore of death,
I will kiss You with bloodtone breath...

As chaos becomes a catalyst 
to mood electric blue,
embrace the voltage vibing true...

Tremble, O heart humble red,
a tremor arrives to blush,
skin warm from love's rush...

I AM Yours...every pulse a spiking of You...

J.A.B.

true loveepic

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Ink Empress

July 9, 2026 at 11:38 AM

This is a big fave for me. And I think anyone who receives such sweet love is lucky! Its good to see your devotion isnt temporary. Pleasure reading this gem. Sending you light always ~

Justin Bordner

July 9, 2026 at 4:26 PM

I can't fathom temporary love...When love is true, it is for life Poetess...I thank you for your warm sentiments...J.A.B..

Ink Empress

July 9, 2026 at 11:37 AM

Wow this is breathtakingly blistering! Left me in awe! Especially of the way youv expressed in a very dedicated manner. Its like through your poetry, I see a very intimate inamorato, passionate poet too. Its beautiful to read such authentic rhymes, and I love the way youv also used " moonstone" there! To depict final sigh! I also absolutely loved "Tremble, O heart humble red," wow! The internal rhythm there, this is just a masterpiece! Honestly. Your muse is lit ~ on electric blue wildfire!

Justin Bordner

July 9, 2026 at 4:23 PM

Yeah, she's beamin' Poetess...Your natural, and technical appreciation of Poetry is awesome! You and I excel through the ancient craft of poetry because we love It, devoted extreme!...J.A.B.

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