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Three Words, Happy New Year

THIS IS NOT A HAPPY POEM, I JUST THOUGHT TO BREAK ALL THE RULES AND TO WRITE SOMETHING DIFFERENT ABOUT NEW YEAR. We take yesterday and we threw it away ,and I ask you if your fine or doing okay But in fact I know that your hurting... And here I go again, leaving you with pain, I have you to blame , I'm driving you insane But only cause I want you to start learning... A new year came washing away yesterday But do you think that it will wash away every painful word you did say ? Do you think that today is different from the last ? Did you thought that a new day will delete the past ? It's a new day to you but I don't feel the same For me it will always be the same old pain Do you think that 24 hours will bring me the joy ? Do you think that three words will make me become your toy ? How do you want me to forget when it's written on my flesh... How can you make my pain vanquish ? So we take yesterday and we threw it away, and you ask me if I'm fine or doing okay But deep down you know that I'm hurting And here you go again, leaving me with pain, you put on me the blame, your driving me insane But I promise you to start learning I have no heart any longer because of you If you think that it's a happy new year then it's only for you For me it will always be the old year that I use to get hurt When you turned my heart to pieces and wiped it in the dirt So happy new year my love I hope you celebrate And happy new year for me cause I'll start it with hate Happy new year for the lie, for the cheating Happy new year for the heart that stopped beating Happy new year for all the wounds that is open Happy new year for the heart that is broken So you take yesterday, hopping to threw it away, then you come to stay, asking if I was or I am doing Okay Well I promise you to make your heart burning And here you come again, to cause me another pain, to make me take the blame, your driving me out of my brain But babe, it's your turn now to get all the hurting

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Date: 1/2/2016 2:56:00 AM
Wow Dalia this is raw in love vengence, yet an avenging of your innocent tears...justice is smoldering on your heart's surface and bleeding in your furious words. I feel, and understand your hurt, for I have my own special love pain too, and this poem's spirit resonates with my own. Your words are like a wind upon my naked soul, its intense, and demands my respect...J.A.B.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/2/2016 7:00:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear for ur supportive words and your pleasant comment , I always feel pleasure when I read ur delightful words , u can understand any sort of feelings , the true poet is the one who can write about everything and anything , it's the one who can understand his own feelings and other people's feelings and present them in a breath taking way , there's no such a great feeling than pain and love , the sweet sting of pain and the mesmerizing love that can capture the soul....I appreciate ur amazing comment and I thank you so much....hugs / / :)
Date: 1/1/2016 3:05:00 PM
what a fascinating poem this is, though it has that drooping theme, nice one Dalia
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Date: 1/1/2016 9:56:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear for ur lovely and breath taking comment I really do appreciate it , and glad you liked it....happy new year hugs / / :)
Date: 1/1/2016 1:21:00 PM
DALIA, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Date: 1/1/2016 12:05:00 PM
Dalia, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Date: 1/1/2016 1:29:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear SKAT for your lovely and delightful words , I appreciate it....I wish u that as well...hugs / / :)
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/1/2016 1:29:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear SKAT for your lovely and delightful words , I appreciate it....I wish u that as well...hugs / / :)
Date: 12/31/2015 8:10:00 PM
Somehow, fate will take care of those who are unkind. Eventually it come storming back to them. We all have difficult times and things that are tough to deal with. Thank-you for the insight into the passage of time. I have hope that I will be able to move ahead when I am surrounded by difficult people. It can be hard.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/31/2015 10:50:00 PM
Yes my friend I agree with you , as I thank you for your interesting and helpful comment , I appreciate it and I'm honored by these great words....big hug / / :)
Date: 12/31/2015 5:22:00 PM
Gosh Dalia this really is a different take on 'Happy New Year' I do hope 2016 is a great year for you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/31/2015 5:35:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear , I thought I should write a new theme of the title of happy new year , different than the usual...I'm glad u liked it and I appreciate your visit.....This poem is totally fictional..Anyways , , happynew year and hugs / / :)

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