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Three Wishes

a shooting star's hope, dropping the coin in the well--- birthday candles blown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 10/27/2009 7:28:00 PM
You put it all together wonderfully. Great composition. And, thanks for stopping by and commenting.
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Date: 9/14/2009 12:09:00 PM
Delightful Haiku Brandee>>James
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Date: 8/8/2009 1:00:00 AM
Such a nice haiku! I love how you presented it, especially your first line :)
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Date: 8/5/2009 7:18:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful comment Brandee. This is extremely clever and creative. Nice work. love, shar xoxo
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Date: 6/15/2009 3:54:00 PM
All such pleasant thoughts. Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. Thank you for the congrats and kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Have a nice evening. Karen
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Date: 6/6/2009 7:36:00 PM
liked it very much
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Date: 5/1/2009 5:58:00 PM
Nice work, I like the concept. Thanks for you comment.
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Date: 5/1/2009 2:25:00 PM
I really like this one. Nice use of alliteration. There is a lot for the reader to think about in just four lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/30/2009 2:36:00 PM
What a clever write, sharp thinking and quite wonderful, James.
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Date: 3/16/2009 6:22:00 PM
This is wonderful, Brandee! Three chances to make a wish that most of us will not pass up. Like John said, this has universal appeal! Great job! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/4/2009 5:38:00 PM
Love this as each line is a time for three wishes. Great flow and perfect Senryu form. Michael
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Date: 3/4/2009 12:58:00 PM
Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 2/27/2009 1:20:00 PM
Love the notions here, Brandee: such universal appeal! I certainly don't need to wish for a solid haiku here for it shines through with certainty. Warm regards, John
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Date: 2/27/2009 12:26:00 PM
Nice haiku, Brandee! Makes me wish a genie would pop out of a bottle and grant me three as well. Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2009 11:45:00 AM
Excellent haiku with a great imagery, bravo! Thanks for your warm comment on my stuff. rgds, Ernesto
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Date: 2/17/2009 10:43:00 PM
Clever haiku , in perfect 5~7~5 format . Wishing you happy writing . ( Now 4 wishes )
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Date: 2/17/2009 12:40:00 PM
Nice hopeful imagery, in such a few words. I love the Haiku ,big image in so few words, two connecting thoughts that complement each other. Good work. Judy Riley
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