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Three Wishes

a shooting star's hope,
dropping the coin in the well---
birthday candles blown

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Ismael Nieves

October 27, 2009 at 7:28 PM

You put it all together wonderfully. Great composition. And, thanks for stopping by and commenting.

James Fraser

September 14, 2009 at 12:09 PM

Delightful Haiku Brandee>>James

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

August 8, 2009 at 1:00 AM

Such a nice haiku! I love how you presented it, especially your first line :)

Sharon Winter

August 5, 2009 at 7:18 AM

Thanks for your thoughtful comment Brandee. This is extremely clever and creative. Nice work. love, shar xoxo

June 15, 2009 at 3:54 PM

All such pleasant thoughts. Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. Thank you for the congrats and kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Have a nice evening. Karen

Cherica Eckiwaudah

June 6, 2009 at 7:36 PM

liked it very much

Tyler Martin

May 1, 2009 at 5:58 PM

Nice work, I like the concept. Thanks for you comment.

May 1, 2009 at 2:25 PM

I really like this one. Nice use of alliteration. There is a lot for the reader to think about in just four lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

James Fraser

April 30, 2009 at 2:36 PM

What a clever write, sharp thinking and quite wonderful, James.

Robin L. Gass

March 16, 2009 at 6:22 PM

This is wonderful, Brandee! Three chances to make a wish that most of us will not pass up. Like John said, this has universal appeal! Great job! Love, Robin

Michael Degenhardt

March 4, 2009 at 5:38 PM

Love this as each line is a time for three wishes. Great flow and perfect Senryu form. Michael

Giselle Sun

March 4, 2009 at 12:58 PM

Thank you for sharing!

John Weber

February 27, 2009 at 1:20 PM

Love the notions here, Brandee: such universal appeal! I certainly don't need to wish for a solid haiku here for it shines through with certainty. Warm regards, John

Carolyn Devonshire

February 27, 2009 at 12:26 PM

Nice haiku, Brandee! Makes me wish a genie would pop out of a bottle and grant me three as well. Carolyn

Ernesto P. Santiago

February 25, 2009 at 11:45 AM

Excellent haiku with a great imagery, bravo! Thanks for your warm comment on my stuff. rgds, Ernesto

Sean Kelly

February 17, 2009 at 10:43 PM

Clever haiku , in perfect 5~7~5 format . Wishing you happy writing . ( Now 4 wishes )

Judy Riley

February 17, 2009 at 12:40 PM

Nice hopeful imagery, in such a few words. I love the Haiku ,big image in so few words, two connecting thoughts that complement each other. Good work. Judy Riley

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