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"Thoughts of a Sexual Nature" Vivid thoughts of you, in your birthday suit. Sprawled on my living room floor, anxiously you wait for what you came here for. Long toned legs, a rippled mid-section. I want to hear you beg, you caused this ********. Incense burn!! Sex on the Beach heightens the mood. I allude, to a massage. A mental mirage, a dream. Vivid thoughts accrue, as I knead your birthday suit. skin like a rare passion fruit, and I'm working for your nectar. You're my aperitif, and I have a sweet tooth for your vermouth. _________________________________________________________ Strumming your neck, my tongue is the pick. Hearing you moan lightly, "Oh your so thick." So eager was the lass, for me to.... hose down her fire. You see, the blaze I intensified. I knew her desires. Slow down I pleaded, hasten your pace! We have all night baby, and first base is my face. I had overdosed on her Vermouth. She poured without a care! Enveloped in lusts rapture, it was, to soon to conclude. Ambiance is important, so I'll set the mood. Red lights, mirrored headboard & playing softly in the background, a love songs interlude!!! _________________________________________________________ Soft moist lips lick you're ear whispering words of delight pursuing my plight for your might, my tongue rolls down your neck peck on peck, as my goal unfolds kissing chest nipples your dimples of gold tanned bronze like a god, excitement, ecstasy extension to explode, the ride enhances as liftoff begins tastier than sins, searing flesh on flesh emotions enmesh juices of love in thrombosis, in oceanic osmosis, as we fall... spent ... content ... in orgasmic opulence..... "This is a collaboration written by three different poets... Starting with Me... Samuel Brooks has the middle section, and Linda Marie Bariana concludes... This turned out well and I am sure all of you will agree.. Jared Pickett---Asavvy1 Samuel Brooks----ChocolateWoW-------------------------1/27/2010 Linda Marie Bariana------Sweetheart

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Date: 2/24/2010 8:11:00 PM
Wheew, Ok! Well The Title Explains It All. The Write Addresses The Topic & Feelings Of Inflamed Passion, Lust, Sex and Erotic Games ... From 2 Passionate Young Men's Points of View and One Very Sweet Girl, A Lady. Writing About Such Things, Is Tricky, The Problem Is, To Speak About Passion & Human Nature, Without Getting Too PornoGraphic, Offending Some's Sensibilities. We All Write Passionately, Every Taste Is Different & Variety & Remember: Let Him Without Sin, Cast The First Stone ... MoonBee
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:26:00 PM
SOUP MAIL ...
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Date: 1/30/2010 11:48:00 PM
I didn't see a mentioning that this poem would be of an adult nature. It should be mentioned and the site should have a separate feature for this type of poems which should not allow folks under 18 to enter. And there are younger people on this site. Even though I appreciate the effort and the poetic composition, this offends me because details of intimacy in my book, should be only between the 2 lovers. Respectfully, Caroline.
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:33:00 PM
Well, heck, I like it. What's all the fuss? My only problem is the misuse of the word "your" when you meant "you are." It should be "you're," not "your" as in belong to. I think this is damn good. Oh, I said "damn." LOL ***Danielle***
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Date: 1/29/2010 12:30:00 PM
excellent! Brava ! Applause! Well done! and FINALLY!
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Date: 1/28/2010 3:45:00 PM
SOUP MAIL REPLY...
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Date: 1/28/2010 11:29:00 AM
Hi Jared! I had to throw in on this! I am a big fan of yours as you know!...what I see here is the freedom to express your (and your fine co-writers) very human feelings in a very physical way....I do not find anything offensive! no one gets hurt or abused! nothing brought out my protector emotion! if some youngins' ask ?...just explain these are adult feelings....(ps. my computers down, reason I am inactive) jimbo
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Date: 1/28/2010 11:03:00 AM
Linda, Sam and Jared, impressive hot piece. I thoroughly enjoyed this " Three Way Collaboration " my comments fully can be read on your blog Jared. The time has come for the members to speak and allow what we want, as we are the Soup >> James
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Date: 1/27/2010 5:21:00 PM
This is Wow and going to my Favz..Passionate..the house is on fire..the soup anyway:)talented..Charma
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:39:00 PM
SOUP MAIL... URGENT ....
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:24:00 PM
god everyone is so uptight on this site. could you imagine if people had said to shakespeare, shelley or byron that they couldn't swear or have sexual content in poems and plays etc. poetry should be about expressing yourself and not being constrained by boundaries. write what you want where you want when you want. some people might not like things but carry on regardless.
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Date: 1/27/2010 3:48:00 PM
enticing! Now you try Prometheus Unbound & When He smiles....remember the mind is your largest sex organ! Light & Love
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Date: 1/27/2010 2:49:00 PM
a/ its incense not in-scents and b/its like a teenager wrote it to get some attention. swearing and sex and violence does not bother me but to be honest i don't even think its well written
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Jared Pickett
Date: 2/10/2014 5:23:00 PM
Thanks for your comments bro, they mean the world to me!!Asavvy1
Date: 1/27/2010 12:30:00 PM
Line nine is what I have right now thanks to all of you!!!lol What can I say about a hot scorcher ( I wore my shades when I read it the second and third and .....you get the idea) ...Nice...wonderful...I'm weak....lol....Marty
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Date: 1/27/2010 12:17:00 PM
To reply to your blog post... am ready whenever u and Wow are ... so just let me know... "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/27/2010 11:00:00 AM
Very erotic write and a well thought out collaboration by three fine poets! Welcome to the Soup, Samuel! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:57:00 AM
Thankxxx for allowing me to complete this poem .. u are both excellent co writers .. lets do it again and again... are u posting a blog about it?? if not I will... let me know.. great job and the words all mesh into one another giving it spice and flair as well as passion and emotion ... it was my pleasure to participate... bravo guys!! luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:47:00 AM
BRAVO...Well done to the three libidos, I mean amigos.....TAH
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