Three Senryu Poems

White Doves

White doves your signals
Lifting the dawn upon their wings
In my damned nights.


Love's Tracks

If stars gave one chance
I'd lie beside your wish
To find holy love's tracks.


Shaping Redemtion

Time ends, you hold me
As moon swirls round our bodies
Shaping redemtion's red.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Valeria. Love, Carol
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February 18, 2011 at 12:46 AM
Many Congrats Valeria for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
George   Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 12:01 AM
Beautiful Senryu's, dear Valeria. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 9:12 PM
Cool win, valeria. Congratulations.
Poet Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Very passionate write!Congrats on your win valeria---kashinath
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February 17, 2011 at 5:07 PM
congratulatiosn on your win valeria
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February 17, 2011 at 10:12 AM
Hello Valeria, Congratulations on your win Valeria, I enjoyed reading this one very much As Always, Shar
Pettit Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Valeria, you wrote these three entries quite descriptively well. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with them.
Freeman Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 7:33 PM
Congratulations Valeria on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, valeria
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February 16, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Congrats Valeria on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support ...
Mehta Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Nice multiple senryu on different themes, valeria. Good luck in the contest.
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