three rivers

river runs rampant
	drunken burbling and babbling ~
		dizzy dragonfly

rambling river rolls
	successful spawning season ~
		earthworm treads water

restful river ride 
	sudden stillness sits softly ~
		water nymph pliés
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Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my pages. Sara
Fowler Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 6:20 AM
Good morning Sara. Thanks for stopping bt. I'm glad you enjoyed this one :) LA
Delaney Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Love these river images and the water ballet of the nymph. Very inspiring. SuZ
Fowler Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 7:38 AM
Many thanks SuZ! Linda
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:18 PM
Brilliant collection, laf. All three gems. G.L. in the contest. :) gw
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 6:38 AM
Many thanks my friend :)) laf
Buehler Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 11:57 AM
A beautiful and vibrant haiku string. Best of luck in the contest, Evelyn :)
Fowler Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Good morning Evelyn. Thank you for reading and commenting. hugs, Linda
Shariff Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Peaceful haikus, nicely crafted. Linda, Good luck in the contest. All the best!
Fowler Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Hello Irfanulla. Nice to meet you! Thank you for visiting and leaving such nice comments. :) Linda
Buhagiar Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 8:47 AM
Three beautiful haikus on nature. Great imagery.
Fowler Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 9:31 AM
Hello dear Victor. Always a pleasure to have you visit. Thank you for the kind comments. Linda
Cunningham Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 8:02 AM
Love the imagery Linda, nothing more soothing than a flowing river. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Fowler Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Good afternoon Tom. That's the word I use, too. Very soothing to watch. :) Thanks for the nice comment and visit. Linda
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