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I hold three magic rocks in my hand Rolling them over and over and over Leaving this reality behind, far behind
Each of my rocks is a wish to be told The first.. not for riches or wealth But a full golden measure of happy good health And the first of my rocks has been rolled With my second rock I would visit my past Meet up with old friends ,my parents and kin My rock I would roll and come back again For I know that the past was not meant to last Now one rock remains, just one in my hands So I’m rolling this last as it surely should be For our precious world, it’s people live free And peace on this earth throughout all its lands

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Date: 2/26/2025 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful write. Great picture and ending... Have a great day.............
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Date: 2/26/2025 6:41:00 AM
Very different ideas here but meaningful ones that i agree with 100%! Xo
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Date: 2/15/2025 3:29:00 PM
Such a thoughtful take on this challenge theme. Well done, Margaret
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/16/2025 4:37:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I think the contest may have been looking for more magical write, but that’s all I could come up with at the time. Take care .
Date: 2/15/2025 9:24:00 AM
Unique take on wishing for the most basic yet important things in life. I really like how you set this up. Well done and thank you for sharing!
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/16/2025 4:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Christopher. It is much appreciated. cheers.
Date: 2/15/2025 6:59:00 AM
Wonderful poem. I would hope your third rock comes true.
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/16/2025 4:33:00 PM
Many thanks Oliver. We can always hope.

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