Three In the Morning

It’s three in the morning

If I touch your breasts

Will you respond

Or scream

You scream

 

It’s three in the morning

I listen to you breathing

We breathe in unison

For a while we become one

Then I choke

 

It’s three in the morning

The smell of sex lingers

The point of no return

Do you care

I wonder

 

It’s three in the morning

Many affairs have passed

I lie thinking

Was there a time

Was there

 

It’s three in the morning

You’re two years gone now

Time still asks questions

Bitterness pollutes you

All of you

 

It’s three in the morning

I lie awake

The walk to the court

Ten seconds to end a lifetime

Divorced

 

It’s three in the morning

Death came calling

Did you cry my name

I lie here wondering

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Date: 9/3/2023 7:15:00 PM
Compelling, yes... if a bit gruesome! Keep 'em com(pell)ing, Paul!
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Paul Bell
Date: 9/4/2023 10:51:00 AM
Three in the morning is a bad time.
Date: 9/3/2023 7:16:00 AM
there's something compelling about this, written in your usual inimitable style
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Paul Bell
Date: 9/4/2023 3:22:00 AM
Stop using big words that require me to find a dictionary. lol
Date: 8/30/2023 4:08:00 AM
Good Morning Paul. Please have a seat and let me ramble. This entry is absolutely gorgeous. Yes gorgeous. All poetry elements are present including the powerful emotive factor. I will forever be a free verse person and you did justice to the format. Last but not least this entry must be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. Be proud of your execution and skill. Honestly. It was an honor turning to your page and skill. Blessings (smile) Read back your entry to see its worth.
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Paul Bell
Date: 8/31/2023 1:48:00 AM
Free verse is definitely the way to go, I get confused with other structures. Hope you're doing well, Lisa.
Date: 8/28/2023 11:37:00 PM
Dragging up many relatable emotions...poignant. :o/
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Paul Bell
Date: 8/29/2023 8:23:00 AM
It does a bit.
Date: 8/28/2023 1:50:00 PM
Emotive pondering…
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