Three In a Booth

It will be her first visit since the day we waved goodbye....

It is spring break !!

It was moving day several months ago...
that she wrapped her small arms around her Grandpa's waist, tearfully
Then turned to me with "I love you" from her small voice"
"I love you more"...I choked, with one last hug...

And then they were gone...
A white van, fully packed, we watched through blurry eyes...heading down the highway
A battered U-Haul, trailing behind.

But at last today is here!...Spring break!!
We are meeting half-way....
Between the two cities so far apart
We are picking her up,  to bring her home......to have her smiles...for just awhile!

Her springtime visit, a school recess
There they are!!  The meeting place we had arranged
And before we know it...she has hopped into our car
And once again...we are heading back home...her suitcases
Her stuffed animals...her smiles and chatter in the back seat of our car.

Lunch time....we must stop for awhile
That cozy diner, that sits out in no-where-land, 
Along the stretch of the Interstate
A place filled with truckers and travelers like us...

The waitress shows us our booth
This child hesitates, ...looks between the two of us
Unable to decide....
"Who would you like to sit with, my love?" I ask.....

When the waitress returns...
Carrying our menus and three glasses of water ...
She is rather startled, as are the other diners..
To find three people tightly squeezed together on one bench
Yet across the table
The other bench remains empty....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/12/2009 1:11:00 AM
Nic squeeze though Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 7/11/2009 12:11:00 PM
YOU are just too cool, Carrie; both writing and commenting!!!! Thank-you for being you. Love, poet butterfly
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Date: 7/11/2009 1:06:00 AM
So true so true Carrie very endearing poetry.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 7/10/2009 11:09:00 PM
my wife ,my son and i hae done this many times over .........great right carrie
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Date: 7/9/2009 8:18:00 PM
That is brilliant Carrie.. I seriously think this is my fave of yours..This is awesome..the opening with her saying goodbye..wrapping her arms around grandpa waist...now the return and the diner and the bench..can just imagine the smile on the waitress face when she saw you all crowded on the same bench...love displayed without a word uttered..amazing writing.
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Date: 7/9/2009 7:56:00 PM
Very sweet recollection of a child's inability to love one family member more than another. I like the way you ended it by having both of them sit on the same bench at the booth. That way, she did not have to choose. For a child, making such a choice must be very difficult. Great write, Carrie! Love, carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2009 7:09:00 PM
oh, I forgot to thank you for your comment on my poem, Carrie, you are very generous with your compliments, jimbo
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Date: 7/9/2009 7:06:00 PM
I remember one Xmas where I so needed to sit next to my visiting daughters, and someone else sat there......
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Date: 7/9/2009 5:26:00 PM
Ain't it wonderful!! She'll be a fabulous success when she grows up knowing that much love as she grows. Vince
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