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Three Gems On Loving a Rock Star

“I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lavish locks sprawl pillowed in peace this morn. Gently whiskered cheeks hint of last night's lipstick Tensions banished blue grassy fiddling lingers Let's take it easy I'll make the omelets while you get a shower, dear. Oh? You'd rather play some more? Alright, eats postponed. Pounding rhythms drumming heartbeats Satiation lullaby. In stillness your breath meanders its way through the vast concert hall of my naked vulnerability cooing minor keyed assurances of something finer. Rifts while integral to the theme render our phrasing discordant at times yet your hard earned skill in handling your fender is spawning a wisdom I don't quite get but it soothes and smooths, warms and relaxes us both and though still stressed out by taxes and injustice, fear and idiocy frustrations from others unable to see we remember our gift of harmony and sing our twin souls free of enmity. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The three forms used to construct this poem are Sapphic Stanza, Sedoka, and Sonnet. Written by Nancy Jones on the evening of August 6, 2011. It was inspired by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ and her contest entitled “Three Gems”

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Date: 8/8/2011 11:47:00 PM
This is great.!!!!! Best of luck in the contest Nancy...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 8/7/2011 6:30:00 PM
Wonderful take on the contest of three gems. Nancy
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Date: 8/6/2011 11:30:00 PM
Beautiful and sensous write Lovely lady...with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/6/2011 10:17:00 PM
wow, what a blend.I could not tell one from the other as I was reading. And what an interesting topic for her contest. This is sure to please her, I hope anyway. Luv, Andrea
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