Three Fingers Above

daybreak
full moon hangs three fingers above
the mountains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Debole Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Hi Ann - Like the clever way you describe the distance. - Gail
Austin Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 2:49 PM
I see a youth leaning on her elbows, looking out the window in sleepy reverie. LOve, daver
Pettit Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 11:57 PM
Nice haiku description of a scene somewhere out west. I live near sea level, and there are no mountains where I am.
Horsman Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 4:05 PM
wonderful vision Ann, wonderful Haiku.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 1:13 PM
Beautiful Ann. - oxox Anne-Lise
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