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This piece was inspired by a personality quiz I took based on five doors. I just chose my three favorites to write about. I wish I could find the quiz online but it's in an old woman's magazine of mine. The article was entitled Which Door Would You Walk Through?

Here is a link for a similar personality test. Take it. It's fun!

http://www.womansown.co.uk/fun/which-door-would-you-walk-through-27386/

 

 

 

 

 

Three Doors

I see three doors before me. The one to the left is blue, a beautiful lupis blue with ornate lacework in its center. Parisian-esque, it looks likes an entrance to adventure and inspires me with its sophistication. I imagine inside the rooms beyond that door exotic curios on shelves along the walls or tables heaped with charming little treasures. My muse’s curiosity is sparked! The middle door I see is that of a welcoming house. Beneath two large rectangles of decorative glass hangs a straw wreath adorned with festive flowers. A friendly-looking white lab sits in front of this door and on each side of it on the old-fashioned porch are two pots of pretty geraniums. I imagine beyond this door friends and family gathered around the kitchen table finishing Mom’s delicious apple pie and preparing to break open a pack of cards or sit beside their fireplace, playing charades or perhaps singing along to a guitar. The part of me that longs for warmth of family lingers at this door. The last door I spy much farther away and surrounded by trees is a light green door blending in with nature, unadorned and not as high as the first two doors. Were it a bit smaller and round, it could almost be the door to a hobbit’s cottage. A bower of vines spreads around it covering the brown bricks of the house, and a short cobblestone pathway leads upward to this simple but interesting door. I know that if I open it and wander in, solitude will surely greet me, a solitude so sweet that when I shut the door behind me, I’ll leave behind the stresses of my life. I will have entered another world where I can rest and meditate. . . perchance to write. I look back at the first door, imagining the thrill of discovery. Its charming blue entices me. Then I return my gaze to the second door from which warmth and empathy exude. I redirect my gaze to the third door. . . Which do I want more? New experiences? Intimacy? Peacefulness? Creative inspiration could reside behind all three. Which one do I choose? Which one would YOU choose? March 28, 2017 for the Doors Contest of Anthony Biaanco
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Alex Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 8:43 PM
I look back at the first door, imagining the thrill of discovery. Its charming blue entices me. A beautiful write on Doors. Congratulations on your win!
Carmack Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 8:38 PM
Nice. Congrats on your top win Andrea.
Chansarkar Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Absolutely beautiful Andrea, lover it!
Roper Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 11:49 PM
Fabulous write, Andrea, congratulations on your win... ~*
May Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 4:03 PM
Congrats on your top win Andrea
Marie Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 8:40 AM
...Congratulations Andrea:) this is a special poem worthy of celebration. I am so happy for you:) lynnxxx
Schwartz Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Congrats on your win !! Your imagination is beautiful and quite amazing.. I would pick door #1 and I think you would too , it's the door your not quite sure what is beyond..
Krampe Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Happy to see this on top of the winners list. Congrats, Andrea.
Beam Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Congratulation on win, Andrea. I would choose all three and but them on one house/home> :)
Showalter Swift Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful write and win! ???Love it!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 12:37 AM
Congrats on top placement in my contest. Well doe Andrea.
Nusker Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 11:05 AM
I want to enter all the three doors and explore everything that lies beyond. Marvelous poem, Andrea.
Hoffman Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 8:41 PM
Awesome write Andrea! I think I'd choose door #1 since I experience a lot of #2 and #3! G/L in the contest!~Che :)
Vinson Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Rich and interesting, Andrea. : ) I got the lady and the tiger. ; )
Hagy Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 4:12 PM
This is so beautiful Andrea...you describe everything so elegantly!...Though any dog at a door would entice me (but only to pet the dog)...this nature's child would probably pick door 3:)...so which one would you choose?
Andresen Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 3:06 PM
- I like that you end it as an open question, Andrea - We all choose different ... right or wrong - sour or sweet - Good luck in the contest with this great poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 9:35 PM
An intriguing write Andrea..Doors 1 and 2 seem more welcoming..Well written
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 8:07 PM
This is an amazing work of art Andrea. I can tell you put a lot of work into it. Brava! 7 ; )
La France Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 5:04 PM
Andrea this is excellent,,you describe all the doors so beautifully .each one would be the right choice~
Austin Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 12:57 PM
Give me door 3. It grabs my Arcadian desires. Love, daver
Pinet Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 11:11 AM
A good read requiring the reader to think as well as feel his way through the words. Your hypnotic words both touch the heart and intrigue the mind, rolling gently off the tongue while drifting quietly into memory. Emile. #7
Callus Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 9:49 AM
Beautifully described, Andrea! All three doors have their allure, but if I had to choose, I would omit no 1, and focus on the other two...first visiting family, and then moving on for some quiet personal quality time:) Regards // paul
Kannan Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 1:41 AM
This is brilliant Andrea....Beautiful description... I would choose door no 2 and 3... I enjoyed it thoroughly... Good luck with the contest. I am sure it will be in the winner's list. And thank you so much for that link... I showed it to my mom and dad and asked them to choose their favourite. A fun one. Thanks for making us smile... A big 7 for this wonderful piece....
Marie Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 10:29 PM
today door one.. the "lupis blue with ornate lacework in its center. Parisian-esque.." intrigues the saggitarian traveller in me. ..before you ask again..lol door two is "family" they live nearby... door three is "peace" which I am blessed to experience daily, the ocean, mountains and forests surround us..though the "white lab" came close, I am researching for a puppy! :-) I didn't see Your choice I will read below for clues. personality test should be fun stay tuned! ..you are too funny :-)
Dupins Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 10:18 PM
Great prose piece! In my earlier years, I'm walking through door number three. Right now, I would walk through door number two. This is an interesting assessment of personality.
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