Lin Lane Poet Monoku

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Murmurs of my heart contest ~ Host: JCB Brul

                       July 12, 2023

Threads of Romance Frayed

I can still hear his voice when harsh winds blow ~ 
his murmurs once calmed my fears

Stars faded and moonlight dimmed ~ 
without romantic whispers in my ear

Twilight descended as we said sad farewells ~ threads 
of our romance frayed

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Terry Miller July 17, 2023 at 3:02 AM Tender, beautiful, and so well written; congratulations Lin Lane July 17, 2023 at 6:12 AM Thank you so very much, Terry.

JC Brul July 15, 2023 at 7:47 AM A tender loving sets of monoku. Congratulations and thank you for your participation in the contest. Blessings.^__^ JCB Lin Lane July 17, 2023 at 6:12 AM It was my pleasure to write for you, JCB. Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2023 at 7:17 AM Loss is very hard… Congratulations, Lin! Lin Lane July 17, 2023 at 6:11 AM Yes, it is, Kim and the sorrow lasts for what seems like forever. Thank you.

Christuraj Alex July 15, 2023 at 12:34 AM A beautiful monoku chain. Congratulations! Lin Lane July 17, 2023 at 6:11 AM Thank you, Chris.

Unseeking Seeker July 14, 2023 at 10:33 PM Poignant, piercing, painful. Warmest congratulations on your win, Lin Lin Lane July 17, 2023 at 6:10 AM Thank you very much, Seeker.

Bj Legros Kelley July 14, 2023 at 2:31 PM Aw, this is beautiful, and so sad. The image shared with this poem was perfectly beautiful and added to the mood of your poem. <3 Lin Lane July 17, 2023 at 6:10 AM Aye, BJ. It is both, and I seem to be drawn to writing about sad themes. Thank you.

Bill Baker July 14, 2023 at 10:26 AM Well-written Monokus, Lin. The photo matched well with the picture you've painted with your words. You say a lot with these limited words, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Lin Lane July 14, 2023 at 10:32 AM Thanks for your reads and kind remarks today, Bill. I've become enamored with writing Monoku lately.

Jay Narain July 12, 2023 at 10:45 AM Great farewell poem. Liked it. Lin Lane July 14, 2023 at 10:31 AM Thank you very much for your thoughts, Jay.