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Murmurs of my heart contest ~ Host: JCB Brul

July 12, 2023

I can still hear his voice when harsh winds blow ~ his murmurs once calmed my fears Stars faded and moonlight dimmed ~ without romantic whispers in my ear Twilight descended as we said sad farewells ~ threads of our romance frayed

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Terry Miller

Date: 7/17/2023 3:02:00 AM

Tender, beautiful, and so well written; congratulations

Lin Lane
Date: 7/17/2023 6:12:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Terry.

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/15/2023 7:47:00 AM

A tender loving sets of monoku. Congratulations and thank you for your participation in the contest. Blessings.^__^ JCB

Lin Lane
Date: 7/17/2023 6:12:00 AM

It was my pleasure to write for you, JCB. Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/15/2023 7:17:00 AM

Loss is very hard… Congratulations, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/17/2023 6:11:00 AM

Yes, it is, Kim and the sorrow lasts for what seems like forever. Thank you.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/15/2023 12:34:00 AM

A beautiful monoku chain. Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/17/2023 6:11:00 AM

Thank you, Chris.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/14/2023 10:33:00 PM

Poignant, piercing, painful. Warmest congratulations on your win, Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 7/17/2023 6:10:00 AM

Thank you very much, Seeker.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/14/2023 2:31:00 PM

Aw, this is beautiful, and so sad. The image shared with this poem was perfectly beautiful and added to the mood of your poem. <3

Lin Lane
Date: 7/17/2023 6:10:00 AM

Aye, BJ. It is both, and I seem to be drawn to writing about sad themes. Thank you.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/14/2023 10:26:00 AM

Well-written Monokus, Lin. The photo matched well with the picture you've painted with your words. You say a lot with these limited words, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 7/14/2023 10:32:00 AM

Thanks for your reads and kind remarks today, Bill. I've become enamored with writing Monoku lately.

Jay Narain

Date: 7/12/2023 10:45:00 AM

Great farewell poem. Liked it.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/14/2023 10:31:00 AM

Thank you very much for your thoughts, Jay.