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Joseph's Threading the Line Contest 4/16/25

Mystical is my attraction to moonlight Luna's soft glow is an inspiration for love Sonnets of romantic lines in rhyme to write Silver orb resting in celestial skies high above Revelations of her beauty when she takes flight Stars surrounding her as lustrous petals of foxglove *Harrisham Rhyme Form with the scheme ababab in which the last letter of the first word of each line is the first letter of the first word of the next line

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Crystol Woods

Date: 4/24/2025 9:19:00 AM

This was a challenging contest which you aced! Xo

Lin Lane
Date: 4/24/2025 11:27:00 AM

Thank you very much, Crystol. I enjoyed Joseph's challenge.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 4/24/2025 7:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win dear poetess with an imaginative write on threading moonlight with poetry in a very skilful way. May the Light that shines from above ever rest with you to illuminate your path.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/24/2025 11:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Krish. I'm very grateful to read your thoughts on my lines.

Joseph May

Date: 4/23/2025 9:13:00 AM

Congrats on your win Lin, Very nicely penned

Lin Lane
Date: 4/23/2025 9:26:00 AM

Hi, Joseph and thanks a lot for the contest placement.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/17/2025 10:28:00 AM

Lin, I like how you tried out this form for this contest. It's a great description of the precious aspects of our co-planet. We call it a moon, but observers from space might picture it differently. I prefer the way you look at it! Smiles!

Lin Lane
Date: 4/17/2025 2:01:00 PM

Thanks, Duke. You know how often I write about celestial ornaments. lol

Jay Narain

Date: 4/16/2025 10:22:00 AM

Nice one.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/16/2025 12:29:00 PM

Thank you.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/16/2025 8:57:00 AM

Oh dear linnersz This one resonates with my heart, and i love how youv presented too with the picture and how your lines flow from one to another! While paying attention to the letters and also rhyme scheme. I would like to challenge myself to try this form too! I especially love the way you’ve written “ Stars surrounding her as lustrous petals of foxglove” your use of foxglove there, i truly loved! Such a gorgeous take this is! I would love to try a moon one too! Best wishes! Sending you light

Lin Lane
Date: 4/16/2025 9:00:00 AM

You are a light unto yourself, Ink. You can write of the moon, stars and you've written of flowers as if you live in a garden bower, so write of flowers and gems and celestial things. It's your forte' to create beautiful poetry to match what you hold inside of you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/16/2025 4:37:00 AM

Looks a tricky form Lin, nothing beats the moon for inspiration, it inspired you well. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 4/16/2025 5:41:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Tom. It's really not difficult. Give it a try.