Thoughts To Ponder

Every cell inside
merge their vitality as one'
to heal those weakened.

Likewise every man
woman should feel a part
like the cells inside.

That when someone's hurt
we converge as one to heal,
living for their sake.

It's the way to peace
One body, one family
with God as parents.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fringe Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 6:27 PM
I have been thinking such similar thoughts. Even those with completely opposing beliefs as mine are the yin/yang for me. How we need those who agree with us and who oppose us with all their being. I need each, and I feel one with them, because truly we are one. I wish I understood that a long time ago. But now I just smile as I look at beautiful faces all around me, each with their own miracle, each a reflection of the same life force. We heal each other regardless when we smile at one another.
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May 23, 2011 at 2:54 AM
I believe that is exactly right, Caroline. Well put and apt simile. The Kingdom of God is made of these. Iwas generally surfing your poem list and I compliment you on your many diverse forms. A thing I need to imitate if I am to grow in the art of poetry. Well done. Your work inspires me
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 12:53 AM
Love your thoughts to ponder, sweetie, and yes, I personified my bee. I was not thinking anything but to make a twist ending with double meaning! LUv, Andrea
Hunt Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 9:22 PM
So very true. I enjoyed this very much.
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May 21, 2011 at 2:13 AM
* “Tis If Not For Love & They Whom Hold Tightly Its Hand Then * Our World Would Be No Less Than Mad Max's Day * And Every Light Which Shines * Becomes A Part of Loves Tree Towards One Days Greatest Dream & Hope * Peace On Earth * And Good Will Unto 'All of Life.' * Beautiful Poem Beautiful Caroline. * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *
Mehta Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 5:22 PM
Creative and impressive verses to ponder over, caroline
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