Thoughts On Turning 32

(just an 
exaggeration 
of 
negativity 
lyrically, so 
dont come 
scolding 
me):) ;)

They 
might 
wish me a 
'HAPPY 
BIRTHDAY'
or even 
'many 
happy 
returns 
of the day
My folks 
send me 
gifts and 
greeting 
Congratulating 
me
on a life 
that's 
fleeting?
Yeah, so I 
happen to 
be
pessimistic 
on this at 
times
who sees 
life as an 
hourglass
One who 
sees the 
glass half 
empty
rather 
than half 
full
For I 
vision 
each 
birthday
as a step 
closer to 
old age
A step 
closer to 
dreaded 
death
Isn't it 
hard to 
look 
forward
to going 
gaga and 
decrepit?
When 
smooth 
skin would 
end 
up 
crumpled, 
wrinkled
Thus each 
birthday 
to me
is a step 
closer to 
the end of 
a 
lifetime
A step 
closer to 
that 
unwanted 
guest- 
senility
The 
reverting 
to child-
like 
inability, 
debility
The 
dwindling 
of all 
agility
The age of 
doddering 
limbs 
half in the 
grave
So I'd 
rather not 
celebrate
the 
nearing of 
the time 
when 
we'd 
playback 
em' flash-
backs
and in the 
mind re-
live our 
life 
tracks.
When 
everything 
would 
trickle 
down to 
mere 
memories
With 
ample time 
to linger 
upon 
life's 
souvenirs.

So a 
birthday is 
a step 
forward
but 
towards 
thy 
graveyard
The road 
to it may 
be longer
or 
unfortunately
may end 
abruptly
in a short 
cut
to heaven 
or to hell
bard or no 
bard!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/8/2018 9:21:00 AM
Oh Zaynab, life begins at 60. The rest is just a waste ha ha.. only at 60 did I get my life sorted out . Youre on fire here though. Stop beatingbyourself up. Youre good to go.
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Date: 5/9/2018 12:07:00 AM
Nice to know that even at 60 there is life, I thought it must be boring but your comment will change how I might view life decades later. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 12/3/2013 8:54:00 AM
Very good,,, But, it would be more if we know each other, right.. Thanks for the comment on mine.
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Date: 10/28/2013 5:01:00 AM
Very nice, indeed! Keep it up!
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Date: 9/26/2013 12:22:00 PM
I just turned 30 years old this year, and it really made me stop and think. I realized that I am going to get older and older, and there is really nothing I can do about it. So, I thought that I should still be having fun while I can!...A very thought provoking poem, you are a talented writer!
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Date: 9/23/2013 7:53:00 PM
Hi s zay,, I think birthdays & the ageing process can be looked at on so many different levels, In a positive self discovery & journey of experiences that shape wisdom and knowledge. Yes the physical body declines but the spirit, mind & soul is the most important value we have, Great thoughts as I approach a birthday in november( lol) you have so much to experience ENJOY!!!!:0)
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Date: 9/20/2013 7:01:00 PM
Heart felt friend,But remember the celebration of ones birthday is not about death but about life and what god has given you.Ill pray for you friend
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Date: 9/9/2013 9:51:00 AM
- Pleased to read your poem .... wish you all the best in future ..... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2013 11:07:00 AM
wow! what an age.. I'm having thoughts on my up coming birthday.. on October 7th... I don't know what to make of my new age... I'm having cold feet turning OLD>..lol..< it is good I guess... love the thought... Linda
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Date: 9/8/2013 9:56:00 AM
interesting poem very nice and thanks for stopping by and reading mine
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Date: 9/8/2013 7:47:00 AM
I think the short lines are great. They just pulled me along demanding to be read. It is ironic that I am reading this today on my birthday. Today I turn 52 and in my heart body mind and soul I feel 32. I have had no birthday that has disturbed me for I know one day this body will be shed like an old garment and I will be provided a glorious new body for eternity. I was not made to lie permanently in a grave and neither are you. Embrace each birthday as a gift. Dance and sing, celebrate!
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Date: 9/7/2013 11:45:00 PM
Just as if you are in my mind. A wonderful write, Zynub. You have something here. Iam also as anxiois as that just that mine is everyday. Keep it up and thanks on your words of encouragement on my work. Ciao.
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Date: 9/7/2013 11:38:00 PM
This is straight from my heart....Wait till you turn 46...All these feelings get even more profound! :( Great write! Very expressive! Thanks for your visit to my work!
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Date: 9/7/2013 10:26:00 PM
Gah again Poetry soup shortens my lines. Why only mine?:'( :-C
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