Thoughts of You

You occupy my mind
two souls now intertwine
connections undefined

A once weary existence
altered through persistence

Written in the stars
through all time and space
you occupy my mind
in this hidden place

Destiny attained
through mystic fires of flame

Fires burn deep
you occupy my mind
even in my sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andreasen Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 4:27 PM
I know what you mean...the kicker to all this heartache that makes us feel alive. Is they don't see the beauty with in us and how they inspire and bring out the beutiful qualities in us to be able to write things about them so poetically. will they ever know? keep writing and sharing! kim*
Valencia Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 11:38 PM
Those undeserving may never know but one day, the right person will. I can no longer occupy my time with people who are undeserving. I might be losing the opportunity of finding my true destiny.
Komala Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 1:54 AM
very touching,, heartfelt write...thanks for sharing Deeana...enjoyed!!! SK <3<3
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