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Thoughts of You

I gave so little,yet you gave so much At times I was numb to your warmest touch Your heart was so loving, your laughter contagious Your eyes ever blue, your smile,outrageous Sweet were your words, generous your heart Yet I still found a way to break us apart So thoughtless was I, so sorry I'll stay for things that were said, that sent you away. it seems for some things, they'll be no forgiving which makes it so hard, this life that I'm living Not able to see you, how long it does seem Yet I see you each night when I lay down to dream I wish you happiness, security and love And may God's hand guide you from His home up above. Copyright ©2010 Robert Longinetti

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Date: 7/20/2012 10:27:00 AM
Congrad's on your fine write making it to round one in an international contest! Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Robt. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2010 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Robert. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:19:00 AM
Touching. Life in retrospect. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Robert. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 3:11:00 AM
Congrats Robert on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 6/14/2010 4:27:00 AM
forgot to rate it.
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Date: 6/14/2010 4:26:00 AM
Finally, a poem good enough to comment on. (Most of them make me whince.) The only thing you need to change is the form from "I don't know" to "rhyme," as it certainly is rhymed quite well. And the content...moved me. Keep writing, keep trying to do the right thing...***Danielle***
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