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Fiction - Written - 27th August 2023 

 

Thoughts of You

Thoughts of you occur walking hills In nodding heads of daffodils In fields of green and waterfall In trees standing stately and tall. You are there in the rising sun In darkness when the day is done The bright sunshine that follows rain Raising my spirit up again. I hear you in string symphony In choirs singing in harmony In sound of birds in trees tweeting In spring’s newly born lambs bleating. I wish us both back together Each moment being a treasure Life has no purpose since you passed If only life was meant to last. I sense the softness of your lips One reason why my heart does flips The memoirs never fade away You’re in my thoughts each night each day.
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Elliott Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Hello Belle, a truly loving remembrance poem that belongs in a memorial poetry collection volume. My late husband passed away almost four years ago, my family and I miss him with each passing day. I hope you have a tranquil evening. ~
Edmonds  Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 6:39 PM
Thank you for those lovely words Regina. I’m so sorry to read of the loss of your husband. Blessings, Belle
Proxenos Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 10:13 AM
A creative fantastic yet heartfelt and emotional poem. How does one ever come to Grips with the loss of someone close and so loved. Be blessed dear Belle thoughts from me to you across this vast pond between us. Jennifer
Edmonds  Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 2:19 PM
Hi Jennifer, I imagine it’s the hardest thing to lose the one who means everything. This is a fictional write, I wrote it for a contest and it got N/A, but I love it anyway… Thank you… Belle
Lindley Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 10:15 AM
A truly great heartfelt poem my friend. Beautiful verses and a fine romantic creation. God bless you.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 11:51 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words Robert and the fave, I am more than delighted, I’m thrilled. God bless you too… Belle
M  Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:20 AM
Belle your touching beautiful poem tugged at my heart strings…..made me emotional! Debx
Edmonds  Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 5:08 AM
Thank you so much Deb, that’s made my day… Belle
One Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:35 AM
Great poem Belle and interesting take on it..
Edmonds  Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:55 AM
Thank you Silent One, very grateful… Belle
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Much enjoyed the tenor of your poem, Belle. Wonderfully crafted thymes evoke emotions--yearning the beloved.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, comments appreciated… Belle
Read Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 2:48 AM
That was beautiful sister Beryl, since losing Ann that's how I feel.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 2:53 AM
I can imagine how you feel brother John, it must hard to carry on… Sis Belle
Faulkner Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Lovely imagery of how the beauty of nature can bring back memories of the one you've lost, I think the first and third stanzas are my favorites~
Edmonds  Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 5:35 PM
Thank you very much Michelle, nature does bring back to heart and mind memories of precious times… Belle
Bowring Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 1:44 PM
A heart rending poem Belle but filled with lovely imagery and uplifting thoughts. Gratitude shines through this delightful poem as the precious gift of memory keeps our loved ones near through the changing of seasons, years. Your line, ‘Each moment being a treasure’ says it all. Thank you for sharing. Blessings
Edmonds  Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Christina, for expressing your lovely thoughts on this poem. If fond memories couldn’t be recalled, there’d be no rhyme or reason to anything at all…. Blessings, Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 12:39 PM
A lovely write/ending/pretty picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............
Edmonds  Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Thank you very much Paula. Enjoy the day… Belle
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