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Thoughts of You

I’ve been thinking lovely thoughts of you My heart swells with pride, growing a smile Happy our bond blossomed after awhile It takes some love and determination too To weather the storms of our crazy family life But sometimes our damaged hurt goes deep A connection you just can’t begin to even keep Yes, we had our tiffs that cut deep like a knife So now I’m blessed ~ We’ve healed quite a bit A couple years it’s been that we had to reflect Took our time to feel deeply and reconnect And I’m overjoyed and grateful we didn’t quit Date Written: 8-18-2019 Writing Challenge 2, August 2019- Enclosed Rhyme Sponsor, Dear Heart

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Date: 8/20/2019 3:23:00 PM
Beautiful example of an enclosed rhyme, Jeanne. It flowed so well I looked to see what kind of poem it was.
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Date: 8/18/2019 8:46:00 PM
This is an excellent example of an enclosed rhyme Jeanne. Nothing is forced, one line flows to the next without any stumbling upon unneeded words. If this is for the contest, it should do very well my friend. I loved it! : ) xxoo
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/18/2019 11:53:00 PM
Thank you Connie. xoxo

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