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Thoughts of Two Dimensions

Thoughts of Two Dimensions Yesterday, I loved your courtyards bathed in moonlight's shadows and smiles, smitten by wavering stars, lanterns of my youth, that are reflected as coins, in the quiet waters of your fountains. Those are my reminiscences arabesque creatures of an old chest, sanctified by the lavender, and left on the bottom of my wardrobe. Today, I love your crowded streets, pebbled alleyways that breathe with aromas of kitchens, shouts of children quarreling, and nagging of older women behind those awnings and windows of life well known. Tomorrow, I will love your hot paved squares that open to the harbors and promising high seas while cypresses will send regards to far away winds, and seagulls will sing nostalgia cries of wandering merchants and sailors.

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Date: 11/23/2010 11:04:00 AM
Madison and James, thank you so much for you loving words...you are so dear!!!
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Date: 11/23/2010 11:01:00 AM
Sylvia, thank you so much for your loving words and soul. I am so happy when I can transfer vision of my heart to you, dear!!!
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Date: 11/10/2010 3:47:00 PM
this was a very vivid and sensational piece. all my senses tingled to what they discovered as i read through this piece. congratulations on your feature. --Madison
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Date: 11/10/2010 1:38:00 PM
Once again, I am privledged to read this write...congratulations being feature dear poet ! much love, james
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Date: 11/10/2010 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Vesna. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 4:20:00 AM
Vesna Hi.What a beautiful poet you are.This is so wonderful to read.I am transported by your descriptive words and the memories and thoughts of your heart and mind that you convey so lovingly.This is pure poetry and appeals to my heart and mind also.Thank you.Congratulations on making the feature page.I'm not surprised.Your words deserve to be read. Love June(sylvia)
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:29:00 PM
Carol, thank you so much for your compliments! Love, Vesna
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Date: 11/8/2010 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Vesna. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:53:00 PM
Thank you so much my poetic friends, you are great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 3/14/2010 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on this fantastic poem being a winner ! james
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Date: 3/5/2010 1:21:00 PM
My congratulations on your win in the PS Intl. Poetry Contest Vasna!
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:36:00 PM
This reminds me of an old coastal village in Italy, Vesna. It's beautiful and captivating. Congratulations on being featured this week.
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured peom this week. Post some more. Ernilando
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:34:00 PM
I never thought of Past and Future as dimensions. You've opened up some thoughts for me here. Congrats on your feature.
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Date: 3/3/2010 4:43:00 PM
Charming write! Very vivid and so posiyive about city life...Light & Love
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:18:00 PM
Vesna~ Congratulations on your featured poem! Very interesting use of vivid language! Laura :)
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:08:00 AM
This is an amazing poem! It makes me think of Paris! Nice write =D -Echo
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Date: 3/3/2010 8:02:00 AM
You've awakened my senses! Excellent.
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Date: 3/1/2010 11:24:00 AM
Interesting, thought provolking story, neat way to recapture pictures in a box. Good imagery, good poem. Congrats on placing in the contest. Judy Riley
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the October 2009 PoetrySoup International Poetry Site Contest Vesna. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:22:00 AM
congrats on the featured poem!! Good work!!
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Date: 2/28/2010 3:49:00 PM
Nice use of imagery in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Soup contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 1/8/2010 9:30:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your powerful pen writing… excellent you! Your friend in poetry Adeleke
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Date: 1/5/2010 12:29:00 PM
Dear Dane Ann, Thank you so much!!!!!! The place still lives in my soul, and it will never perish. God Bless!!!!!!
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations Vesna, You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with yoru poem "Thoughts of Two Dimensions". I'm impressed by your words. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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