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Thoughts of Nothingness

Thoughts of nothingness embrace the moonlight caress the emptiness of pilfered light drape it across the meadows in dull gray to light a path for lover’s gone astray -- as crafty shadows hide their sin from sight. A distant riffle mourns the tree strung kites that never lived the dreams they thought they might for something on the wind made them betray -- Thoughts of nothingness… Cold stars will mock the stillness of their plight as on a crooked moon their tears alight to haunt a saddened mist upon the bay adrift upon a tide that could not stay but edges ever closer with moon’s height. Thoughts of nothingness… ©4/19/2022 Your Favorite Theme Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/17/2022 7:33:00 AM
An amazing write, congrats on your well deserved win, John, superbly crafted
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Date: 5/13/2022 9:40:00 AM
John, congratulations on your winning rondeau. Every line is filled with amazing images - "on a crooked moon their tears alight," "adrift upon a tide that could not stay," "dreams" that never lived. You really pulled out all the stops for this one. Blessings.
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Date: 5/13/2022 8:10:00 AM
Your "THOUGHTS OF NOTHINGNESS" is a creative write. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
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Date: 5/13/2022 7:44:00 AM
What a rondeau! Congratulations.
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Date: 5/13/2022 4:39:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and beautifully written. It has a sense of melancholy and unfulfilled dreams about it. Very atmospheric !
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Date: 5/12/2022 7:59:00 PM
Somber and emotive write! Congratulations on 3rd place trophy, John!
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Date: 5/12/2022 6:53:00 PM
"Thoughts of nothingness…" Wow! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2022 1:09:00 PM
I love your poem ~...the tree strung kites that never lived the dreams they thought they might ~...a tide that could not stay... I must fav this poem! And congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/12/2022 12:09:00 PM
Wonderful writing. God bless you and Congrats . Love, Gina
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Date: 4/20/2022 2:16:00 PM
This stunner is proof that Something comes of Nothing -- Shakespeare be damned! ~ gw
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