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Thoughts of My Inner Child

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Where has your mind gone, mirror man? Can I call you my creator or my craft? Your gaze awaited my unman. Yesterday's raft is today's raft. I can't find you any longer. "Do you likewise?" a youngster asked. His heart would glisten at the center. What couldn't mumble satisfied? I'm guessing cries are powerful. As a result, I was running in a haze. My ultimate goal is to be a fire fuel. The child's goal was to blaze.  A runaway child leaves his imprint. The wrapped double braid is stunning. Shrunk and bark in a couple of rate. Were these his etheric dropping? The windswept over his sight His earthy eyes betray his naivety His genuine condition has blight. Even when he was quiet, he had a glee. I can feel myself collapsing to the floor. No man in the mirror in my universe.  I have a child within my spoor. I sobbed and hugged; it's getting worse. I was suffocated by his adoration. Until I had the option to cry or shed a tear. I'm 54 years and have only discovered the sun. I was always lurking, waiting for you to veer.
Written: September 6, 2021 Your Inner Child Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/13/2021 7:51:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me have a look of that child in you. God bless you.
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Date: 9/13/2021 7:34:00 PM
"I have a child within my spoor." Beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/13/2021 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Lasaad. This so reminds me of the song "Man in the Mirror" who never veers but always reflect the changing face and eyes of the inner child. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 9/7/2021 5:38:00 AM
Deep in thoughts, Lasaad. Wonderful introspective write. All the best.
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Date: 9/7/2021 1:40:00 AM
We get older and wiser Lasaad but I don't think our inner child ever leaves us. Tom
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Date: 9/7/2021 1:08:00 AM
As we grow old our inner child confuse us more. I dare not think about it.
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Date: 9/6/2021 6:06:00 PM
A most intriguing consideration of the child inside of you, Lasaad. I wonder if the inner child loses us; or, do we lose the inner child as we get older?
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