Get Your Premium Membership

Thoughts of Losing You

I can’t grasp the thought of losing you, Like a sea without waves, my heart is still. I am lost, not looking for ways that are new, You were my oxygen my lungs no longer fill. I long to change the events that have transpired, Wanting to keep writing the words that you love, Hoping we can keep this relationship set fire, So our dreams can be set free like a dove. My love will last longer than any star, It travels deeper than the core of the earth, I will always find you no matter how far, Even, if I must start over from birth. Please accept these words into your soul, Allow them to take root and plant deep, Guard them from despair, a black hole, For in them is my heart for you to keep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/5/2011 7:06:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your exceptional poetry Brian. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 4/5/2011 6:25:00 AM
passionate feelings and yearnings of love well penned, Brian
Login to Reply
Date: 4/5/2011 1:38:00 AM
so sad but very romantic..good poem..love,Deb
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things