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Somedays I feel like a three legged table lolol 

written for the contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh this or that i chose three legged table

When all is but dark and dreary, and coldness wraps the silhouette of my wooden surface, I listen to the wafer thin whispers echoing in whimsy tones- when the moon wind-chimes sway to the balmy breeze; hung on the side of a weathered balcony, where the sun sometimes unfurls her feathery fingers, to rest upon timber corners of my psyche, I search for compassionate caresses to comprehend unsung serenades. But tonight I feel the burden I carry in somber stillness, as my voice is unheard, amidst pen and paper wrapped around my chestnut skin, with scribbled poems of ancient tales. For I’ve long been sitting like a silenced marionette, letting my bones serve beyond I can give. Somedays I am your listener, whilst you grieve in seclusion, as obsidian tears stain the edges of my tanned shoulders, when fears sink into the depths of carved linings within my hollow heart. Yet, sometimes, I hear your laughter, sharing the redolent rainbows within your soul, when storms steer away, to paint your crystalline canvas with mauve memories entwined with mulberry musings. But I still stand frozen; a three legged table, with nowhere to hide, whilst the world remains oblivious, to the aching heartbeats- imprinted between cinnamon glazed bruises. Perhaps, there will be a time, when clocks shall halt and tick to the rhythm of my thoughts, and you’ll feel the heat of my unshed truth, and I will no longer be just a mere ornament designed to perform as you please.

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Date: 11/10/2023 5:39:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-earned contest top win. Blessings
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Date: 11/10/2023 4:40:00 AM
"clocks shall halt and tick to the rhythm of my thoughts, and you’ll feel the heat of my unshed truth" - highly poetic writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/9/2023 7:32:00 PM
I liked this exceptional personification poem the best out of the Three-Legged Table theme. Striking imagery throughout! A fave. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest, Inky!
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Date: 11/9/2023 11:22:00 PM
Wow thank you for the fave and your comment truly grateful for all your support always. It was a quick write and i am so pleased and honored that you think it is good and it was placed high. Ah! THANK YOU
Date: 10/30/2023 6:11:00 PM
Ink, you are always so amazing in your writing- EMPRESS. I adored reading you tonight. This was beautiful.
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Date: 10/29/2023 5:40:00 PM
so well written, images are beautiful, my fav for the contest yann
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Date: 10/29/2023 7:53:00 AM
Dear Ms. Ink, My only comment is ditto and your poetry gift is truly a feast for the soul. If this was really just a quick right what's left to come? Best of wishes in the contest and always.
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Date: 11/9/2023 11:22:00 PM
Awwn thank you so much dear kind soul i appreciate you so much
Date: 10/28/2023 10:42:00 PM
Wow. Personification at its most brilliant. Another incredible write... I enjoy how this piece is a bit different your usual, and yet just as captivating. Keep on writing and keep on shining.
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:19:00 AM
Awwn beautiful warrior poetess im blessed to receive your feedback. Thank you so very much truly
Date: 10/28/2023 12:19:00 PM
Dear Ink, Your poetry takes me on a trip with words and makes me feel as if I'm floating. Your poetry is not only beautifully written, but it also evokes a feeling of mystery and wonder. When you're feeling down, composing poetry might help you feel better, like it did for me. This pom is profound and beautiful. You have a unique artistic skill that both impresses and inspires me. I'm certain that Edward will appreciate this poem. Wish you good luck anyway.
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:18:00 AM
Dear Sotto you are too kind and generous thank you so very much for always being so supportive. Truly grateful
Date: 10/28/2023 11:30:00 AM
A deep and meaningful personification of a wooden table, Ink Empress. Also, a deep and heartfelt metaphor for each of us as we serve a purpose in life whilst containing an unsatiable desire to have our authentic selves known to others. I believe in a mere eternity it will manifest for each and every one of us. Blessing and Light my friend. Bill ps a FAV for my list.
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:18:00 AM
Dear Bill im so happy to read your comment receiv your fave and also to see that iv been heard! U and sara , my fave couple you both truly inspire me to be here. Thank you so much
Date: 10/28/2023 10:15:00 AM
Oooooo the depth of this piece papi!!!! sun sometimes unfurls her feathery fingers, to rest upon timber corners of my psyche, letting my bones serve beyond I can give… the kind of heavy u bring is just time stopping!! as obsidian tears stain the edges of my tanned shoulders, aching heartbeats- imprinted between cinnamon glazed bruises.ooo these lines.. pure treasure.. indeed you won’t!! I will no longer be just a mere ornament designed to perform as you please… loooove that ending !!!
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:17:00 AM
Awwn papi i wrote this quickly and posted glad u thought its good thank u so much
Date: 10/28/2023 9:55:00 AM
Brilliant poem! Very well written.
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for always being so supportive
Date: 10/28/2023 7:47:00 AM
seen it all, heard it all, felt it all as time moved on, yet the table stayed stationary, the use of color in this poem is impeccable, a beautiful poem of descriptive emotions, dear poet
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:05:00 AM
Dear Frederick you truly understood my poem so well, thank you so much for your kindness always
Date: 10/28/2023 6:40:00 AM
But tonight I feel the burden I carry in somber stillness, as my voice is unheard---Somedays I am your listener, whilst you grieve in seclusion, as obsidian tears stain the edges of my tanned shoulders, when fears sink into the depths of carved linings within my hollow heart. A FAVE for this splendid personification, Ink. The table speaks eloquently with human emotions.
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:04:00 AM
Ahh vijay you are so kind and generous with your thoughts and support always, i am forever grateful that a talented poet like u appreciate my work. Thank you so much
Date: 10/28/2023 5:02:00 AM
a brilliant take on the 'three-legged table' contest. Your personification is exquisite filled with the joy and aching the table witnesses. I don't think I've ever seen a personification so unique, so profound and one that flows so beautifully. You have such artistic skill--a skill that awes and inspires me. I'm sure this poem will be a prime contender in the contest. Whether or not it does, know it's a winner and one that will speak deeply to others. Have a light-filled day, Sara
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:04:00 AM
This means alot coming from such a talent soul like you sara, your kindness and support i truly am grateful for. Thank you for always lifting me up
Date: 10/28/2023 2:21:00 AM
The visions of life as perceived by the three-legged table have truly dawn a very emotive and vulnerable state for me here..When it feels like carrying an overwhelming burden and being exhausted by giving more than it ever actually receives..Also, how it is a witness of different feelings, from melancholy to euphoria, whilst remaining unseen to this materialistic world who often acts as negligent..And that ending! I'm sure this one's going to be one of the top winners, you truly nailed it hun!
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Date: 10/28/2023 2:11:00 AM
I like how you have mentioned the table is a listener . How much has the table listened to over the years . Beautiful one . Well done
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:03:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much
Date: 10/28/2023 2:08:00 AM
My goodness, this is the most meticulously crafted, spellbinding and whimsical personification I've read in a long while! I don't think that anyone can easily fathom such profound ideas and thoughts to personify a three-legged table.. Woah, I'm really awestruck by the creativity that thrives in your artistic heart, dear Ink! You've expressed a whirlwind of scenes as seen and experienced whilst linking every emotion with the humanly sentiments of feeling like a mere ornamented antique object! Wow
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:03:00 AM
Awwn angelic star your comments always leave my heart full! Thank you so very much truly
Date: 10/28/2023 2:05:00 AM
If it was like i could picture a very sad table... you personified a miserable and lonely table very well.. You can feel the table is seen as useless, which has effected it confidence and self esteem.. You really brought the poem in to life and this is a deep and emotive take on the prompt and one that is clever and unique, but you always have a clever poetic mind... you are a blessing to with site.. long may you continue with your poems and support for others...
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Date: 10/29/2023 4:02:00 AM
You really understood my poem so well. And u are always so kind and supportive thank u so much for your generous thoughts. Truly grateful

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