Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Thoughts Drifting Into Night's Allure

Aromatic sweet fragrance permeates our air
In eminence of your fragile Jasmine flowers
As lovingly you engage slender ruby buds
Tending to green foliage in softest of whispers
In verses of your heart, meant for me to hear;

Guiding my sight higher to mysterious universe
As glowing night-sky unveils celestial theater
Where twinkling exuberant stars brilliantly glitter
Arousing amorous stares breathing in unison
Standing cheek to cheek, conversing with Venus;

Extolling seductively passionate secret dreams
Unfolding revelry in doting pregnant themes
Welcoming salutations--yearning for much more
Exhilarated by amour of dulcet solicitations
Deciphering inference of romantic metaphors;

Embracing each other in zealous anticipation--
Sensuous thoughts drifting into night's allure
Enticed by lure of every flirtatious rhythmic pulse
Eager to explore melodies of moonlit affections
As mating song of nightingale serenades our love.

August 8, 2019
Poem of the day on August 10, 2019
Placed 1st: Strand choice T contest by Brian Strand
Placed 3rd: One in four poetry contest by Joseph May

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Paula Goldsmith March 30, 2020 at 12:48 PM Congratulations on your win. Your pen was writing love. Enjoy your day.........

Aniruddha Pathak October 8, 2019 at 1:25 AM A brilliant piece of poetry, that has claimed a rightful 3rd place, and a POD status, congrats.

Darlene De Beaulieu September 2, 2019 at 1:37 PM Hello Vijay Pandit, I felt like i was part of your poem. have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands August 29, 2019 at 8:04 AM Congratulations for being #4 on the best poem list Vijay! :) Vijay Pandit August 29, 2019 at 4:33 PM Thank you Heidi..much appreciate your kind remarks.

Arturo Michael August 29, 2019 at 5:39 AM I seem to have been lost for week...How did I miss this... A lovely write of mating,,,Congratulations Vijay...All the best my friend Vijay Pandit August 29, 2019 at 4:33 PM Much appreciate Arturo..many thanks.

Ovidiu Bocsa August 29, 2019 at 2:13 AM Enjoyable verses of a perpetual winner who found the inner Promise Land. I like to visit you now and then when allowed to admire your Island of Happiness. Vijay Pandit August 29, 2019 at 4:32 PM I appreciate your visits, Ovidiu--many thanks..hope you enjoyed the poem.

Beautiful Scars August 25, 2019 at 12:27 PM congrats for both wins! :)-luloo Vijay Pandit August 27, 2019 at 9:09 AM Much appreciate, Lu Loo--many thanks.

Joseph May August 25, 2019 at 9:50 AM "Drifting into the "melodies of Luna"...Congrats on your win Vijay.. Vijay Pandit August 27, 2019 at 9:09 AM Much appreciate..many thanks, Joseph.

Robertina B. August 21, 2019 at 7:45 PM A belated congratulations on your POTD, Vijay.. I absolutely enjoyed your work of art.. Imagery is excellent!! I found myself drifting into nights allure.. You had taken me there, my friend.. Splendid verse! Vijay Pandit August 23, 2019 at 7:40 AM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks..many thanks Robertina.

Silent One August 18, 2019 at 4:56 AM so many great lines here Vijay, full of romance and serenades... great romantic poetry my friend and congrats on a deserving potd.. Vijay Pandit August 21, 2019 at 11:13 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Sandra Adams August 17, 2019 at 7:45 AM who better to converse with then venus the goddess of love when setting the scene for such a romantic poem! This is beautiful from the beginning through to the end...well done! :) hugs Vijay Pandit August 21, 2019 at 11:13 AM So true. You are very kind Sandra..much appreciate..many thanks.

Susan Ashley August 13, 2019 at 11:52 AM Your exquisite imagery just takes my breath away, Vijay. 'Standing cheek to cheek, conversing with Venus' is sure to entice sensual thoughts of love. A brilliant masterwork, my inspiring friend. Congratulations on your wonderful recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Vijay Pandit August 13, 2019 at 4:07 PM Always a delight to read your cheerful comments my friend..you are so very kind..much appreciate..many thanks, Susan.

John Hamilton August 13, 2019 at 8:24 AM Belated congrats Vijay on your well deserved POTD, enjoyed this romantic interlude! Vijay Pandit August 13, 2019 at 10:12 AM Thank you John..always appreciate your visit and comments.

Charles Messina August 12, 2019 at 9:05 PM Absolutely brilliant write Vijay. Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved my friend. Charlie Vijay Pandit August 13, 2019 at 7:57 AM Much appreciate Charlie...you are so very kind--many thanks.

CayCay Godwin August 11, 2019 at 7:01 PM A stunningly beautiful write. I see it won potd, well deserved! All the best ... CayCay Vijay Pandit August 12, 2019 at 7:11 AM So special to read your comments CayCay..much appreciate your visit..many thanks.

Wren Rushing August 11, 2019 at 4:45 PM Congrats Vijay on a beautiful poem of the day! Have a great Sunday my dear poet! Vijay Pandit August 12, 2019 at 7:10 AM Thank you Wren--you are so kind..much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose August 11, 2019 at 2:59 PM Enticingly beautiful Vijay , have a great da xo Vijay Pandit August 12, 2019 at 7:09 AM Much appreciate my friend..many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos August 11, 2019 at 2:01 PM Hi Vijay, Your poem is exquisite, sensuous, imaginative and creative. This honour bestowed upon you today was inevitable, your poem is a masterpiece my friend, kudos for this write and congratulations for POTD! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit August 12, 2019 at 7:09 AM Much appreciate your kind remarks Jennifer--always a pleasure to read your comments..many many thanks.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 11, 2019 at 6:37 AM Congratulations on POTD Vijay! Lovely done. xomo Vijay Pandit August 11, 2019 at 7:18 AM So special to hear from you Maureen..much appreciate the visit and kind remarks..many many thanks.

Ann Gilmour August 11, 2019 at 2:08 AM Back with many congratulations Vijay as I have just seen you have POTD, so well deserved! With kindest thoughts Ann xx Vijay Pandit August 11, 2019 at 7:16 AM Your kindest thoughts make the day, Ann..can't thank you enough for the cheerful comments..including the FAVE.

Brandy Nicole August 10, 2019 at 9:07 PM The images you paint, create such a beautiful picture. You are an Artist!! Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit August 11, 2019 at 7:14 AM Thank you my friend for the accolades..so pleasant and precious...including the FAVE.

Connie Marcum Wong August 10, 2019 at 4:40 PM Vijay, I am happy to see this favorite poem of mine be honored with POTD! Congratulations on your most deserving honor! : ) xxoo Vijay Pandit August 10, 2019 at 5:08 PM Yes indeed--many thanks for your vote of confidence, Connie..quite an honor to get a FAVE from you..much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

David Mchattie August 10, 2019 at 3:58 PM Wonderful piece my friend. Such imagery!! Have a great day. Vijay Pandit August 10, 2019 at 5:06 PM So glad you liked it David..much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Eve Roper August 10, 2019 at 3:37 PM Wow!!!Your work is amazing, my friend...… Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Vijay Pandit August 10, 2019 at 5:05 PM Delighted by your visit and comments, Eve..much appreciate ..many many thanks.

Alexis Y. August 10, 2019 at 3:34 PM WoW! Vijay, What a well written and poetic poem. Your pen is amazing and you do not disappoint. I wish you the best of luck in contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit August 10, 2019 at 5:04 PM It is always special to hear from you my friend..much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Alexis.

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