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Thoughts Drifting Into Night's Allure

Aromatic sweet fragrance permeates our air In eminence of your fragile Jasmine flowers As lovingly you engage slender ruby buds Tending to green foliage in softest of whispers In verses of your heart, meant for me to hear; Guiding my sight higher to mysterious universe As glowing night-sky unveils celestial theater Where twinkling exuberant stars brilliantly glitter Arousing amorous stares breathing in unison Standing cheek to cheek, conversing with Venus; Extolling seductively passionate secret dreams Unfolding revelry in doting pregnant themes Welcoming salutations--yearning for much more Exhilarated by amour of dulcet solicitations Deciphering inference of romantic metaphors; Embracing each other in zealous anticipation-- Sensuous thoughts drifting into night's allure Enticed by lure of every flirtatious rhythmic pulse Eager to explore melodies of moonlit affections As mating song of nightingale serenades our love. August 8, 2019 Poem of the day on August 10, 2019 Placed 1st: Strand choice T contest by Brian Strand Placed 3rd: One in four poetry contest by Joseph May

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/30/2020 12:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Your pen was writing love. Enjoy your day.........

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 10/8/2019 1:25:00 AM

A brilliant piece of poetry, that has claimed a rightful 3rd place, and a POD status, congrats.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/2/2019 1:37:00 PM

Hello Vijay Pandit, I felt like i was part of your poem. have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/29/2019 8:04:00 AM

Congratulations for being #4 on the best poem list Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2019 4:33:00 PM

Thank you Heidi..much appreciate your kind remarks.

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/29/2019 5:39:00 AM

I seem to have been lost for week...How did I miss this... A lovely write of mating,,,Congratulations Vijay...All the best my friend

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2019 4:33:00 PM

Much appreciate Arturo..many thanks.

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 8/29/2019 2:13:00 AM

Enjoyable verses of a perpetual winner who found the inner Promise Land. I like to visit you now and then when allowed to admire your Island of Happiness.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2019 4:32:00 PM

I appreciate your visits, Ovidiu--many thanks..hope you enjoyed the poem.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/25/2019 12:27:00 PM

congrats for both wins! :)-luloo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2019 9:09:00 AM

Much appreciate, Lu Loo--many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 8/25/2019 9:50:00 AM

"Drifting into the "melodies of Luna"...Congrats on your win Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2019 9:09:00 AM

Much appreciate..many thanks, Joseph.

Robertina B.

Date: 8/21/2019 7:45:00 PM

A belated congratulations on your POTD, Vijay.. I absolutely enjoyed your work of art.. Imagery is excellent!! I found myself drifting into nights allure.. You had taken me there, my friend.. Splendid verse!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2019 7:40:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks..many thanks Robertina.

Silent One

Date: 8/18/2019 4:56:00 AM

so many great lines here Vijay, full of romance and serenades... great romantic poetry my friend and congrats on a deserving potd..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2019 11:13:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/17/2019 7:45:00 AM

who better to converse with then venus the goddess of love when setting the scene for such a romantic poem! This is beautiful from the beginning through to the end...well done! :) hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2019 11:13:00 AM

So true. You are very kind Sandra..much appreciate..many thanks.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/13/2019 11:52:00 AM

Your exquisite imagery just takes my breath away, Vijay. 'Standing cheek to cheek, conversing with Venus' is sure to entice sensual thoughts of love. A brilliant masterwork, my inspiring friend. Congratulations on your wonderful recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/13/2019 4:07:00 PM

Always a delight to read your cheerful comments my friend..you are so very kind..much appreciate..many thanks, Susan.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/13/2019 8:24:00 AM

Belated congrats Vijay on your well deserved POTD, enjoyed this romantic interlude!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/13/2019 10:12:00 AM

Thank you John..always appreciate your visit and comments.

Charles Messina

Date: 8/12/2019 9:05:00 PM

Absolutely brilliant write Vijay. Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved my friend. Charlie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/13/2019 7:57:00 AM

Much appreciate Charlie...you are so very kind--many thanks.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/11/2019 7:01:00 PM

A stunningly beautiful write. I see it won potd, well deserved! All the best ... CayCay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/12/2019 7:11:00 AM

So special to read your comments CayCay..much appreciate your visit..many thanks.

Wren Rushing

Date: 8/11/2019 4:45:00 PM

Congrats Vijay on a beautiful poem of the day! Have a great Sunday my dear poet!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/12/2019 7:10:00 AM

Thank you Wren--you are so kind..much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/11/2019 2:59:00 PM

Enticingly beautiful Vijay , have a great da xo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/12/2019 7:09:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend..many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/11/2019 2:01:00 PM

Hi Vijay, Your poem is exquisite, sensuous, imaginative and creative. This honour bestowed upon you today was inevitable, your poem is a masterpiece my friend, kudos for this write and congratulations for POTD! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/12/2019 7:09:00 AM

Much appreciate your kind remarks Jennifer--always a pleasure to read your comments..many many thanks.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/11/2019 6:37:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Vijay! Lovely done. xomo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2019 7:18:00 AM

So special to hear from you Maureen..much appreciate the visit and kind remarks..many many thanks.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 8/11/2019 2:08:00 AM

Back with many congratulations Vijay as I have just seen you have POTD, so well deserved! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2019 7:16:00 AM

Your kindest thoughts make the day, Ann..can't thank you enough for the cheerful comments..including the FAVE.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/10/2019 9:07:00 PM

The images you paint, create such a beautiful picture. You are an Artist!! Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2019 7:14:00 AM

Thank you my friend for the accolades..so pleasant and precious...including the FAVE.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/10/2019 4:40:00 PM

Vijay, I am happy to see this favorite poem of mine be honored with POTD! Congratulations on your most deserving honor! : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 5:08:00 PM

Yes indeed--many thanks for your vote of confidence, Connie..quite an honor to get a FAVE from you..much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

David Mchattie

Date: 8/10/2019 3:58:00 PM

Wonderful piece my friend. Such imagery!! Have a great day.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 5:06:00 PM

So glad you liked it David..much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/10/2019 3:37:00 PM

Wow!!!Your work is amazing, my friend...… Congratulations on POTD. Hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 5:05:00 PM

Delighted by your visit and comments, Eve..much appreciate ..many many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/10/2019 3:34:00 PM

WoW! Vijay, What a well written and poetic poem. Your pen is amazing and you do not disappoint. I wish you the best of luck in contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 5:04:00 PM

It is always special to hear from you my friend..much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Alexis.