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Thoughts Drifting Into Night's Allure

Aromatic sweet fragrance permeates our air
In eminence of your fragile Jasmine flowers
As lovingly you engage slender ruby buds
Tending to green foliage in softest of whispers
In verses of your heart, meant for me to hear;

Guiding my sight higher to mysterious universe
As glowing night-sky unveils celestial theater
Where twinkling exuberant stars brilliantly glitter
Arousing amorous stares breathing in unison
Standing cheek to cheek, conversing with Venus;

Extolling seductively passionate secret dreams
Unfolding revelry in doting pregnant themes
Welcoming salutations--yearning for much more
Exhilarated by amour of dulcet solicitations
Deciphering inference of romantic metaphors;

Embracing each other in zealous anticipation--
Sensuous thoughts drifting into night's allure
Enticed by lure of every flirtatious rhythmic pulse
Eager to explore melodies of moonlit affections
As mating song of nightingale serenades our love.

August 8, 2019
Poem of the day on August 10, 2019
Placed 1st: Strand choice T contest by Brian Strand
Placed 3rd: One in four poetry contest by Joseph May

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/30/2020 12:48:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Your pen was writing love. Enjoy your day......... Login to Reply

Aniruddha Pathak Date: 10/8/2019 1:25:00 AM A brilliant piece of poetry, that has claimed a rightful 3rd place, and a POD status, congrats. Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/2/2019 1:37:00 PM Hello Vijay Pandit, I felt like i was part of your poem. have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 8/29/2019 8:04:00 AM Congratulations for being #4 on the best poem list Vijay! :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/29/2019 4:33:00 PM Thank you Heidi..much appreciate your kind remarks.

Arturo Michael Date: 8/29/2019 5:39:00 AM I seem to have been lost for week...How did I miss this... A lovely write of mating,,,Congratulations Vijay...All the best my friend Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/29/2019 4:33:00 PM Much appreciate Arturo..many thanks.

Ovidiu Bocsa Date: 8/29/2019 2:13:00 AM Enjoyable verses of a perpetual winner who found the inner Promise Land. I like to visit you now and then when allowed to admire your Island of Happiness. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/29/2019 4:32:00 PM I appreciate your visits, Ovidiu--many thanks..hope you enjoyed the poem.

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/25/2019 12:27:00 PM congrats for both wins! :)-luloo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/27/2019 9:09:00 AM Much appreciate, Lu Loo--many thanks.

Joseph May Date: 8/25/2019 9:50:00 AM "Drifting into the "melodies of Luna"...Congrats on your win Vijay.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/27/2019 9:09:00 AM Much appreciate..many thanks, Joseph.

Robertina B. Date: 8/21/2019 7:45:00 PM A belated congratulations on your POTD, Vijay.. I absolutely enjoyed your work of art.. Imagery is excellent!! I found myself drifting into nights allure.. You had taken me there, my friend.. Splendid verse! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/23/2019 7:40:00 AM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks..many thanks Robertina.

Silent One Date: 8/18/2019 4:56:00 AM so many great lines here Vijay, full of romance and serenades... great romantic poetry my friend and congrats on a deserving potd.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2019 11:13:00 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Sandra Adams Date: 8/17/2019 7:45:00 AM who better to converse with then venus the goddess of love when setting the scene for such a romantic poem! This is beautiful from the beginning through to the end...well done! :) hugs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2019 11:13:00 AM So true. You are very kind Sandra..much appreciate..many thanks.

Susan Ashley Date: 8/13/2019 11:52:00 AM Your exquisite imagery just takes my breath away, Vijay. 'Standing cheek to cheek, conversing with Venus' is sure to entice sensual thoughts of love. A brilliant masterwork, my inspiring friend. Congratulations on your wonderful recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/13/2019 4:07:00 PM Always a delight to read your cheerful comments my friend..you are so very kind..much appreciate..many thanks, Susan.

John Hamilton Date: 8/13/2019 8:24:00 AM Belated congrats Vijay on your well deserved POTD, enjoyed this romantic interlude! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/13/2019 10:12:00 AM Thank you John..always appreciate your visit and comments.

Charles Messina Date: 8/12/2019 9:05:00 PM Absolutely brilliant write Vijay. Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved my friend. Charlie Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/13/2019 7:57:00 AM Much appreciate Charlie...you are so very kind--many thanks.

CayCay Jennings Date: 8/11/2019 7:01:00 PM A stunningly beautiful write. I see it won potd, well deserved! All the best ... CayCay Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/12/2019 7:11:00 AM So special to read your comments CayCay..much appreciate your visit..many thanks.

Wren Rushing Date: 8/11/2019 4:45:00 PM Congrats Vijay on a beautiful poem of the day! Have a great Sunday my dear poet! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/12/2019 7:10:00 AM Thank you Wren--you are so kind..much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/11/2019 2:59:00 PM Enticingly beautiful Vijay , have a great da xo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/12/2019 7:09:00 AM Much appreciate my friend..many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 8/11/2019 2:01:00 PM Hi Vijay, Your poem is exquisite, sensuous, imaginative and creative. This honour bestowed upon you today was inevitable, your poem is a masterpiece my friend, kudos for this write and congratulations for POTD! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/12/2019 7:09:00 AM Much appreciate your kind remarks Jennifer--always a pleasure to read your comments..many many thanks.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/11/2019 6:37:00 AM Congratulations on POTD Vijay! Lovely done. xomo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/11/2019 7:18:00 AM So special to hear from you Maureen..much appreciate the visit and kind remarks..many many thanks.

Ann Gilmour Date: 8/11/2019 2:08:00 AM Back with many congratulations Vijay as I have just seen you have POTD, so well deserved! With kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/11/2019 7:16:00 AM Your kindest thoughts make the day, Ann..can't thank you enough for the cheerful comments..including the FAVE.

Brandy Nicole Date: 8/10/2019 9:07:00 PM The images you paint, create such a beautiful picture. You are an Artist!! Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/11/2019 7:14:00 AM Thank you my friend for the accolades..so pleasant and precious...including the FAVE.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/10/2019 4:40:00 PM Vijay, I am happy to see this favorite poem of mine be honored with POTD! Congratulations on your most deserving honor! : ) xxoo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2019 5:08:00 PM Yes indeed--many thanks for your vote of confidence, Connie..quite an honor to get a FAVE from you..much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

David Mchattie Date: 8/10/2019 3:58:00 PM Wonderful piece my friend. Such imagery!! Have a great day. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2019 5:06:00 PM So glad you liked it David..much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks.

Eve Roper Date: 8/10/2019 3:37:00 PM Wow!!!Your work is amazing, my friend...… Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2019 5:05:00 PM Delighted by your visit and comments, Eve..much appreciate ..many many thanks.

Alexis Y. Date: 8/10/2019 3:34:00 PM WoW! Vijay, What a well written and poetic poem. Your pen is amazing and you do not disappoint. I wish you the best of luck in contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2019 5:04:00 PM It is always special to hear from you my friend..much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Alexis.

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