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Thoughts Are No Less Things

Wandering Through an art gallery I couldn’t help but wonder where The ocean of artistic ideas may be found. Down Deep inside our brains where cells contain the seeds Of every memory, emotion and intelligence lying scattered All ‘round. Later I dreamed that things were not quite as they so very Often precisely appear. Angels danced while we romanced like we were Making immortal love right here. Intertwined and intermingled, interconnected Separateness turned single. Leaving me and you somewhere reaching the outer Limits Of space between your mind and mine and a concept we call time. Reeling and Dealing In the perplexities of where thought originates, I was left concluding nothing more Or less than Consciousness as the Ultimate Intangible Underlying Everything From soup to nuts and saints to stars leading me to believe in Thoughts No less things than birds with wings and songs to sing As close as you and I are near enough to Far.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/23/2011 7:00:00 PM
love the shape and artistic flare!!
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Date: 10/21/2011 11:35:00 AM
Somehow, I knew what I would be reading when I read the supercool name of the poem; and I must say, it went par my expectations. Great lines. Hope you see home soon, dear Terry.
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Date: 10/21/2011 8:49:00 AM
very cool poem love the shape p.d.
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Date: 10/21/2011 8:35:00 AM
Even though you are far, you are very near in this lovely verse. It needs to be read more tan once to absorb the complexity then it digests so well. Missed you Terry, hope your travel plans gel and you get home soon. I'll keep in touch.
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:43:00 AM
quite a complicated day dream is this. Imagine it took quite a long time to write. but the effort was worth while. it is a very good poem, which makes you think. i like this
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:32:00 AM
i know how frustrating it can be when the poem doesn't appear exactly the way you intended it to appear, but it doesn't take anything away from the beauty of this poem. it's the first poem i've read since soup came back to life and it was a lovely welcome back. thank you for it!
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:13:00 AM
The words "limits" and "dealing" were intended to be placed at the end of the preceding lines. But for some unknown reason the words were dropped down into their current positions. In sum, "It's a fluke" I didn't plan on. Cheers, Terry
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