Mohamed Adel Poet Rhyme

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The more I know 
The sadder I grow 
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The woman: in the name of love 
I’m going to rip your skin off!
The man: in the name of love
My money is not enough!  
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Sorry, miss, I have traded our love story
For my personal glory!
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They said: you should be optimistic
You should try
I replied: indeed! This world can be better
When pigs fly! 
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Look, miss, I appreciate your charm and lure
But if you want me to love you, you have to implore!
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I love her because she is pretty
But why would she love me? Out of pity?!
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I want us to be in love, but not to fall
I want us to bloom together and soar
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They are down on the ground……
Envy him, but holding hands
When he is on top, better than them……
But alone he stands
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There is no flower without a thorn
But still flowers aren’t forlorn!
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Things fall fast if they have big weight
But one can fall even faster, if he has a mate!

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Constance La France July 6, 2015 at 8:05 AM Mohammed, you have penned many great words within this creative write, I love what you wrote in your comment on my senryu 13, "poetry needs suffering " I just may have to steal that phrase and thanks for visiting Mohamed Adel July 7, 2015 at 4:49 AM Thank you so much for stopping by, and you're right but i don't know whether poetry is written despite of suffering or because of suffering!,we seem to like it and the suffering anyway!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri June 21, 2015 at 7:09 AM Wow a very unique creative extraordinary poem and many lines made me giggle n smile. To want to be in love but not to fall, yay. And the pigs fly line lol. Nicely imaginative yet many lines true about life n love. Kudos. Wonder if I have read u before? Pls do review my latest poem too. Mohamed Adel June 21, 2015 at 1:20 PM Thank you,Zaynub, so much for commenting and pointing out such clever observations,glad you liked it :)