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Thoughts

thoughts gathering in the field of a solitary mind thoughts from the deep past come they bow then fly away like clouds of the tropical storm tossing here and charging there the thoughts come mocking me listening to me, inquiring from me demanding from me high thinking where is sympathy and innocence? where is the saintly forgiveness? while the thoughts keep flowing in torrents, in waves, in shingles, in ebbs then repentance hang on penance gyves in tongs of endurance guarded by dedication and determination but thoughts gather on the ingathering thoughts and the solitary mind is left but thoughtless

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Date: 10/7/2010 5:15:00 AM
Thoughts mocking to have positive thoughts and eventually it becomes thoughtless. Nice write, bulinya
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Date: 10/7/2010 2:54:00 AM
Excellent write, to me in the stillness of the night the wayward thoughts begin to invade and plague the mind destroying moments of solitude and peace. Enjoyed this read.
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