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I smile when I talk to you I wish to hold you tight Yet in this cave I have to stay and think throughout the night The way you used to hold me how special I would feel And now my soul is numb within was your love for real You never said you wanted me no words were even their The tension built up inside from memories we'd share Everything is different now your miles from my heart Yet my thoughts stay with you and wish to never part Maybe we weren't meant to be my heart will question why Good bye for now but don't let go for you I'll always try

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Date: 9/20/2009 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:51:00 AM
Shari, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:31:00 PM
congrats on being a featured poet!!
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Date: 9/14/2009 8:10:00 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem; your poem speaks for itself. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Shari. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 5:57:00 PM
Shari, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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