Though Its Crude
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Wispy, striated clouds
Across the pale blue sky
Revealed by the sun proud
Who is low now, not high
Across the pale blue sky
A swallow dips and dives
Who is low now, not high
Closer to earth, survives
A swallow dips and dives
Catches those bugs for food
Closer to earth survives
Feeding young, though its crude
With live bugs as young wait
Catches those bugs for food
Young not knowing their fate
Feeding young, though its crude
Catches those bugs for food
Revealed by the sun proud
Feeding young though its crude
Wispy, striated clouds
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Written: June 03, 2022
Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2022
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