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Those we love do not go away, they walk beside us every day, sometimes they fall as drops of rain, washing away heartache and pain, and then, shine upon like sun-ray. Sending blessings through the soft snow, they make our winters warm - mellow, glowing among the twinkling stars, smiling within fragrant flowers, they guide us along the life's flow. Those we love do not go away, they walk beside us every day........ Placed fifth Those we Love Poetry Contest Sponsor- Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 7/25/2025 8:01:00 AM
Dear Vandana, I adore your use of rich natural and emotional imagery in your touching and expressive poem. I was especially struck by "sometimes they fall as drops of rain,/washing away heartache and pain" - so poignant and beautiful. A soulful and satisfying piece. Congratulations for your success in Rose's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/25/2025 8:13:00 AM
It is my immense pleasure and happiness that whatever little I can write, makes others happy. thank you so much.
Date: 7/24/2025 10:00:00 AM
Love this form for this contest! Congratulations!xo
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/24/2025 10:14:00 AM
I am always up for some poetic forms!.Glad that you like it. Thank you
Date: 7/24/2025 5:15:00 AM
Invigorating composition and exquisite thoughts and feelings. Congratulations on winning the contest, esteemed poet, and thank you for your insightful comment on my page.
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/24/2025 6:19:00 AM
Glad you liked it. Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 7/24/2025 4:41:00 AM
refreshing write. beautiful thoughts. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/24/2025 6:21:00 AM
Much obliged for your heartfelt words. Thank you.
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/24/2025 6:20:00 AM
Much obliged for your heartfelt words. Thank you.

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