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ECHOES
I open the sewing basket, letting my eyes and hands run over the tools she had used—the scissors, the darning egg, the pinking shears, the pins, the tattered, tomato-shaped pincushion, and spools of thread. I gaze at the metal spool-shaped bobbins remembering how, as a small child, I flushed them down the toilet creating quite a ruckus. I finger her antique thimbles recalling her numb fingers and hands. Despite her diminishing eyesight, she quilts until her last day, painstakingly feeling the fabric, cutting the shapes, and hand stitching the pieces together silently suffering from the pricks and misery her needle sometimes inflicted. When tiny drops of cerise colored blood dripped from her fingers nary a tear emerges from her eyes. I close the basket and walk through her sewing room, white silence enveloping it. The faceless dress form patiently waits for her return, an unfinished garment draped over its shoulders. The sewing machine sits idle, its motor no longer whirring and the needle no longer punching through the fabric with its steady, rhythmic chuka, chuka, chuka sound.
echoes pierce silence sound of mother’s spirit I know in my heart
*I published this poem in Poetry Soup in June 2025, then deleted it. This is my original poem, and I'm reposting because this poem is a special one for me.

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Date: 7/18/2025 11:46:00 PM
This poignant piece is steeped in quiet reverence, grief, and enduring love. It reads like a lyrical elegy—a meditation on memory, maternal legacy, and the deeply tactile nature of loss.
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Date: 7/18/2025 5:25:00 PM
Touches my heart every time I see a picture of your mother, mom to me. She was a lovely young woman and a fine wife for Pop. Heartfelt poetry, Sara. Hugs, Bill
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/18/2025 5:26:00 PM
me too, hubby! I almost cry when I see her picture. She was the quintessential wife and mother...so glad you knew her. She loved you
Date: 7/18/2025 5:23:00 PM
This is very beautiful to remember - enjoyed the homey feel to this
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Date: 7/18/2025 5:24:00 PM
what kind words of encouragement...thank you dear Paige. Have a wonderful weekend, Sara
Date: 7/18/2025 4:43:00 PM
this is quite moving poetry, with great sensitivity and memories, enjoyed
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Date: 7/18/2025 5:23:00 PM
awwww, thank you Yann! I appreciate your visit and encouraging words. Sara

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