Those Special Words

Those special words I whispered 
                                I meant them from the start
                            Just knew you were the one for me
                                You had a smile in your heart
                           And when you said them back to me
                                I saw the sparkle in your eyes
                                  I simply swam into the sun
                                      Now your mine for life





                                        © Copyright KC.Leake
                                         29th November 2016
                                           All Rights Reserved


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/29/2016 9:41:00 AM
Well written romantic verse Kevin. // Barry
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Kevin Leake
Date: 11/29/2016 11:24:00 AM
Thanks Barry, For the visit and nice comment Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 11/29/2016 9:33:00 AM
This is so very tender and heart warming. excellent rhyme and rhythm beautifully written and well expressed with wonderful emotion. From 1 to 7 it gets a 10 from me. God Bless, JB
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Kevin Leake
Date: 11/29/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Judy, I appreciate your visit and comments Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 11/29/2016 6:13:00 AM
Very sweet a lovely happy ending.: )
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Kevin Leake
Date: 11/29/2016 6:32:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine, I really appreciate your comment Best Wishes Kevin
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