Those Special Words

Those special words I whispered 
                                I meant them from the start
                            Just knew you were the one for me
                                You had a smile in your heart
                           And when you said them back to me
                                I saw the sparkle in your eyes
                                  I simply swam into the sun
                                      Now your mine for life





                                        © Copyright KC.Leake
                                         29th November 2016
                                           All Rights Reserved


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Stebbings Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Well written romantic verse Kevin. // Barry
Leake Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Thanks Barry, For the visit and nice comment Best Wishes Kevin
Ball Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 9:33 AM
This is so very tender and heart warming. excellent rhyme and rhythm beautifully written and well expressed with wonderful emotion. From 1 to 7 it gets a 10 from me. God Bless, JB
Leake Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Thank you Judy, I appreciate your visit and comments Best Wishes Kevin
Chircop Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 6:13 AM
Very sweet a lovely happy ending.: )
Leake Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Thanks Charmaine, I really appreciate your comment Best Wishes Kevin
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