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Those Special Words

Those special words I whispered I meant them from the start Just knew you were the one for me You had a smile in your heart And when you said them back to me I saw the sparkle in your eyes I simply swam into the sun Now your mine for life © Copyright KC.Leake 29th November 2016 All Rights Reserved Fictional

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Barry Stebbings

Date: 11/29/2016 9:41:00 AM

Well written romantic verse Kevin. // Barry

Kevin Leake
Date: 11/29/2016 11:24:00 AM

Thanks Barry, For the visit and nice comment Best Wishes Kevin

Judy Ball

Date: 11/29/2016 9:33:00 AM

This is so very tender and heart warming. excellent rhyme and rhythm beautifully written and well expressed with wonderful emotion. From 1 to 7 it gets a 10 from me. God Bless, JB

Kevin Leake
Date: 11/29/2016 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Judy, I appreciate your visit and comments Best Wishes Kevin

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/29/2016 6:13:00 AM

Very sweet a lovely happy ending.: )

Kevin Leake
Date: 11/29/2016 6:32:00 AM

Thanks Charmaine, I really appreciate your comment Best Wishes Kevin