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OH NO! We're all alone again. No Master to tell us when or even what we must do We're all sad and feelin' blue. Can someone give us a suggestion, point us in the right direction in our search for a new boss? Without one, we Minions are at a loss. If anyone can hear our voices please tell us what are our choices. Come closer, we won't bite You won't satisfy our appetite. Would you help in our search? Don't tell us to look in a church. That's not the kind of dominion to find a new leader for a Minion. We're not telling you lies. Are you afraid because of our eyes? Well, you don't have to frown! Stop it, or we'll smack you down! Kevin said, No. It's not good to be bad like our old masters who were mad. No more naughty corner for us, boys. No more evil masters treating us like toys. We may be little and yellow but that's no reason to abuse a fellow. Time to find a good Master. One who won't make us create disaster. YES! Let's go tell the other Minions we've greased our brain pinions. We'll not be 'impish guys." Maybe those bananas made Stuart wise. ********* They're still roaming all about seeking a Master who isn't a lout. Good luck, Minions; when you've found the one keep making silly movies and having fun. I hope the new Master they find will be good to them, gentle and kind. It would end their blue depression and maybe their naughty acts of aggression. These days those cuties of a single cell, sometimes still raise a little bit of hell. The Minions always make me laugh. Maybe they'll send me their autograph! """""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" February 17, 2016 Minion Contest by: Silent One

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Date: 2/28/2016 12:30:00 PM
Lin, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo
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Date: 2/28/2016 3:31:00 PM
Thank you ~ I hope you're healing without too much pain.
Date: 2/27/2016 2:07:00 AM
Hi Lin. Congrats on your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/27/2016 4:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Teddy.
Date: 2/26/2016 8:06:00 PM
Good write, Lin. Congratulations on your “ Minions” contest win!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/27/2016 4:46:00 AM
Thank you, Eve and hugs back.
Date: 2/26/2016 5:55:00 PM
Very nice write, congratulations!!
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Date: 2/27/2016 4:46:00 AM
Thank you, Sarita.
Date: 2/26/2016 4:30:00 PM
This is great, Lin! Congrats on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thanks, Janice and congratulations to you for 1st place!
Date: 2/26/2016 7:59:00 AM
well, here comes an autograph from one...i am not a single cell one though lol, that's a nice entry you've made Lin, best wishes for the contest
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Date: 2/26/2016 8:21:00 AM
lol I'll take your autograph, and thanks.
Date: 2/17/2016 10:41:00 PM
Oh I do love this one Lin, excellent write good luck in the contest, it certainly deserves a win Take care.......Vera
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Date: 2/18/2016 3:07:00 AM
Thanks, Vera. I'm glad you like it so well.
Date: 2/17/2016 3:25:00 PM
Lin, you did so well with this. I did not even know they were sngle cell creatures. Frankly, I have no idea what they are. I might attempt a senryu for this one. I could never approach the detail you have put into yours!
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Date: 2/17/2016 3:47:00 PM
Watch a movie. I didn't want to until I spent a few days with my daughter and she put it on for my grandson...haha...lol I'm glad I did. Thanks for liking it.
Date: 2/17/2016 2:16:00 PM
This is so cute and funny and the rhymes are perfect. I think you have penned a winner here. SuZ
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Date: 2/17/2016 3:45:00 PM
Thanks, Suz. They're so cute.
Date: 2/17/2016 12:50:00 PM
super rhyme Lin, really cutely done, makes one smile!
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Date: 2/17/2016 12:55:00 PM
They're such wee little rascals. Thanks, Gordon. I'm glad it made you smile ;)
Date: 2/17/2016 11:11:00 AM
Really nice to see your humorous side. Very cute poem. Peace my friend.:)
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Date: 2/17/2016 11:55:00 AM
lol ~ Sometimes my silly side gets me into trouble ~ cest le vie! Thanks for reading.
Date: 2/17/2016 10:51:00 AM
lol Lin :), I love your take on the "minions"...:), jill
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Date: 2/17/2016 11:54:00 AM
Thanks, Jill. Their movies are so silly, but so entertaining.

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