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Those sad violin tunes

Those sad violin tunes play for me, from the depths of heart The moment when love failed me The moment I became a toy, the moment I became a sick doll Set to be used at will and discarded without being given a second glance Those sad violin tunes bid my tears to flow Even if the night air is smooth and the stars twinkle ecstatically Happy to be existing, even if they are the only ones to be aware of their aim Love is a strong word, heavy, fragranced and carries with it double meanings It can lift me up As it can break me It can gift me wings As it can bury me deep in its own pit It can have me dance even if I don't know how to As it can have me fall from the highest summits if it so wishes to Lost in my own wavy and messy wave I craft a poem to share with the tunes of the sad violin tunes So that my heart finds enough will to breathe, easy and steady Love, being such a powerful word, Is something I wish not to know Especially not on this fallen Earth, An abode which remains too harsh for my frail heart! Those sad violin tunes, so like rogue waves Trample upon the blooms of my heart As I get transported back to a time When love, which I wished to glorify Turned me into a nocturnal monster, capable of Functioning only during the day time whilst Having to hide my true self at the fall of the night!

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Date: 8/1/2024 6:20:00 PM
' The moment I became a toy, the moment I became a sick doll. ' That's not love. It's more like a game between the heart and every emotion. Not a good feeling at all. This is tender and sad, all at the same time. I'm curling your thoughts gently around me. Congratulations Anoucheka, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/1/2024 3:13:00 PM
When love turns into a nocturnal monster we tend to weave musical lines that depict melancholia so well and i see youv written one that is so touching and soulful. And i felt the depth of emotions expressed here in such a poignant mannr with creative lines. So moving. Violin one of my fave instruments… Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on POTD well deserved
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Date: 8/1/2024 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Anoucheka! Your use of fresh imagery is marvelous. This poem is so real and captures the emotional nightmare of love lost! Sending you blessings of comfort for your "frail heart."
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Date: 8/1/2024 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. A  violin can play sadness as well as joy. It is up to the hands that hold it. Have a blessed day writing Away................................
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Date: 8/1/2024 7:55:00 AM
Dear Anoucheka, reading your poem is a beautiful serene experience even though it is veiled in melancholy. All your lines take me away to a world of love and loss, especially this one.. "It can gift me wings/ As it can bury me deep in its own pit.." Thank you for writing such a poignant soulful poem and sharing with us! Whenever I read your poem, I am in awe, and so much wish to follow your steps. Congratulations on your honour of POTD - you absolutely deserve this! Sending this to my FAVES. Love and warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 8/1/2024 7:09:00 AM
Anoucheka, congratulations on POTD! You're strong enough to write such a bittersweet poem. I felt everything reading over this twice, I had two tears come out of my right eye and roll down my cheek. Such an inspiring experience you've given me this morning, thank you for that—blessings to you. Warm Regards, William
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Date: 8/1/2024 7:08:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD! Enjoyed reading-
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Date: 8/1/2024 4:52:00 AM
Dear Anoucheka, First let me congratulate you on this melancholy POTD ! Reading this I felt the lingering pain of past heartbreak. What a deep sense of emotional woundedness. So well written! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/1/2024 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 8/1/2024 1:11:00 AM
This is a sad yet a well written poem Anoucheka, fact or fiction I hope all is well. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 7/31/2024 12:09:00 PM
I wrote a similar themed poem some years ago about a Scot who lost his lass, so each morning he played a mournful tune on the bagpipes. Hope you have a great week
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Date: 8/1/2024 5:29:00 AM
Well, looks like your week has been enhanced by a POTD. Nice
Date: 7/31/2024 10:29:00 AM
"I craft a poem to share with the tunes of the sad violin" crushing Anoucheka. Unrequited love many resonate with, to live broken while the stars glisten who will listen to a hurting heart, poets will hear the cries! You are brave, let time be a soothing balm. ~hugs
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