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Those Rose Petals

Those rose petals "My pen drips of sorrow and on this paper, I write each tear" . He was my treasure,my pot of gold. When he passed and it made my blood run cold. They laid him to rest so we put him in the ground. The rose petals in my hands I through them all around. My heart was broken when they said he died. His rose petal covered casket is why my eyes will never be dried. Teresa Skyles 13-Aug-11 Entered in Constance La France~A Rambling Poet~"Just write"contest

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Date: 8/16/2011 6:27:00 PM
Touching write from your heart Teresa..
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Date: 8/16/2011 2:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Teresa, on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem, and thanks for your ever comments on my poetry~~
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:50:00 PM
Congrats Teresa,beautiful write blessings Paul
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Date: 8/15/2011 12:36:00 PM
This is such a beautiful write Teresa, I could picture this in my mind-- just also want to help, I think Andrea also noticed the same words to look out for in spelling-- Super congrats on your win,your ending here is just so touching...
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:44:00 AM
a brief but rich shout-out of congrats on your glowing win before soup knocks me off, teresa.. awhhh! huggs :) :)
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Just Write" contest Teresa. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:56:00 AM
acongratulations on your win Teresa. Joyce
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Date: 8/14/2011 10:54:00 PM
Congrats Teresa on super second place win with these wonderful words my friend... honors to be sharing place with u luv..
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Date: 8/14/2011 10:00:00 PM
Can you sing like the redhead songbird??
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Date: 8/14/2011 9:59:00 PM
this is wonderful, teresa. Watch the spelling though. it's rose petals in my hand I threw them all around. Constance might count you down for it and I would like to see this one rate high!!!
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Date: 8/13/2011 7:49:00 PM
so touching Teresa my friend.. such a moving write from the deepest part of your heart.. thankxx for your sweet comments on my poetry always and good luck in the contest my friend.. so sorry to hear u are wheel chair bound right now.. and those nasty fires plaguing so close to home.. let us pray for rain for your area luv..
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Date: 8/13/2011 5:41:00 PM
Wonderful interpretation and equally nicely read sentiments, teresa
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