Those Nights When

Those hands
When they touch me
My skin comes alive

Those lips
When you kiss me
They intoxicate

Those hips
When they press in
My fire rises

Those breasts
When I caress
I am in heaven 

Those eyes
When I see them
My world is complete

Those moments
When passion reigns
You drive me insane

Fantasy Contest
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Bono Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 3:16 PM
still waiting for the poem about the turd in the grass.LMFAO!Colleen
Lamoureux Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 5:58 PM
Your wish is my command. Check it out.
Hamilton Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 9:45 AM
this should do well Richard very tasteful but extremely passionate gl Shadow x
Lamoureux Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 12:31 PM
Thanks Shadow
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 2:30 PM
oohh la la, Richard. You are on fire with this one. Good entry!!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 3:31 PM
Thanks Andrea, hugs Rick
Hicks Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 12:33 AM
Insanity is better than monotony... he he. Good work! When people say fantasy I always think of dragons and pixies, not realizing the "other" kind of fantasies that could just as easily apply.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 8:11 AM
You bet it is
Guzzi Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 6:15 PM
A nice fantasy aye! Light & love
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Thanks Debbie, what form am I writing in?
Puddifoot Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 5:02 PM
ooh yes, I like this a lot! it's very sensual and tastefully erotic (good title too) :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:02 PM
Thanks Charlotte I'm pleased you like it.
Manassian Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:46 PM
Well....I'm speechless...that in itself says....A great deal! 7
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 5:33 PM
:-)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 3:32 PM
No question mark somehow hit wrong key. Just Smiling!
Manassian Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 11:28 PM
Question mark????
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:02 PM
You make me smile?
Tacito Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 11:21 AM
Hell yeah! Embracing the seductive whispers of night. Awesome!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Thanks Drake
Bauer Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 10:33 AM
great title and a wonderful poem!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Thanks ilene. I'm glad you like it.
Bono Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 9:00 AM
You cannot only make words come alive,but you can feel the emotions.Love Colleen
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Aww thanks Colleen. Hugs Rick
Trifiatis Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:49 AM
Richard that's the spirit! I believe the ladies will fall in love with your excellent poem! Good luck!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:06 PM
Thanks Demetrios, it is nice getting all this positive feedback.
Van Breda Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:28 AM
Fantasy or Reality... great poem with plenty of descriptive passion.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:06 PM
Hi Kim, thanks so much for the sweet comment. Hugs Rick.
Hamilton Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 7:21 AM
the passion builds as you read erotic very tastefully done excellent pen Shadow
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Good morning Shaddow, thanks for commenting
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