Those Hose

There was a girl in seventh grade Who let the top show on her hose I was just fascinated to see I didn't even know I liked those! About that time was when I heard "Is that right Pat?", from my teacher I tore away my gaze to see I had become, the main feature! Out of the corner of my eye "Legs" moved, a new bearing to assume Great! Why now when...."PAT IS THAT RIGHT?", Boomed loudly across the big room! All eyes on me I had to think quick It felt like my face was on fire "Yes?", I said, being with quick wit Could my mouth, be any drier? Amazingly, he just moved on From "legs" I got a cold hard stare It was a very long hour Before I could get out of there!

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/19/2018 10:44:00 PM

Sounds like all eyes we're on you after the leg moment Pat…no wonder you couldn't wait to escape! Great fun nostalgic write!~Che :)

Pat Adams
Date: 3/20/2018 3:41:00 PM

Yes, well it didn't take a lot to embarrass me so when there was just cause, it was very uncomfortable for me. If I could go back, it certainly wouldn't be that far!...80)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/19/2018 4:17:00 PM

I can just picture the scene pat, so vivid is your imagery I can almost feel the heat of you blushing lol:-) hugs jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 3/19/2018 4:24:00 PM

Well, I sure felt it that's for sure. Even though I felt it before, it still worried me that some horrible thing was going to happen that I didn't know about yet!....Life is hard for a new teen!...........80)

Fj Thomas

Date: 3/19/2018 11:33:00 AM

Lol I take it you're a "leg man". Fun piece Pat!

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/19/2018 7:34:00 PM

You sound like my husband! lol

Pat Adams
Date: 3/19/2018 4:11:00 PM

I've never really tried to favor one part over another, usually falling for what ever part was presented to me!!! I've always loved everything about women, except when you make them mad!!! Look out!!!..........Patrick

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/18/2018 5:23:00 PM

Hello Pat,at that time it was an embarrassed moment for you. Have a nice evening my friend.

Pat Adams
Date: 3/19/2018 4:06:00 PM

Hello Darlene, and yes I was very shy and stuffed full of hormones so it was extremely awkward!....Be well...pat

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/18/2018 5:05:00 PM

ha! i can just picture that scene, pat! how young and innocent you were! i agree with tom - it's interesting how certain things just stick in our minds long after the fact...

Pat Adams
Date: 3/19/2018 4:05:00 PM

Absolutely, with the female experiences being by far the most memorable! (The weaker sex?!? Who ever made that up?)..........Thanks for commenting Ilene!......Pat