Pat Adams Poet Rhyme

Those Hose

There was a girl in seventh grade
Who let the top show on her hose
I was just fascinated to see
I didn't even know I liked those!

About that time was when I heard
"Is that right Pat?", from my teacher
I tore away my gaze to see
I had become, the main feature!

Out of the corner of my eye
"Legs" moved, a new bearing to assume
Great! Why now when...."PAT IS THAT RIGHT?",
Boomed loudly across the big room!

All eyes on me I had to think quick
It felt like my face was on fire
"Yes?", I said, being with quick wit
Could my mouth, be any drier?

Amazingly, he just moved on
From "legs" I got a cold hard stare
It was a very long hour
Before I could get out of there!

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Cheryl Hoffman March 19, 2018 at 10:44 PM Sounds like all eyes we're on you after the leg moment Pat…no wonder you couldn't wait to escape! Great fun nostalgic write!~Che :) Pat Adams March 20, 2018 at 3:41 PM Yes, well it didn't take a lot to embarrass me so when there was just cause, it was very uncomfortable for me. If I could go back, it certainly wouldn't be that far!...80)

Jan Allison March 19, 2018 at 4:17 PM I can just picture the scene pat, so vivid is your imagery I can almost feel the heat of you blushing lol:-) hugs jan xx Pat Adams March 19, 2018 at 4:24 PM Well, I sure felt it that's for sure. Even though I felt it before, it still worried me that some horrible thing was going to happen that I didn't know about yet!....Life is hard for a new teen!...........80)

FJ Thomas March 19, 2018 at 11:33 AM Lol I take it you're a "leg man". Fun piece Pat! FJ Thomas March 19, 2018 at 7:34 PM You sound like my husband! lol Pat Adams March 19, 2018 at 4:11 PM I've never really tried to favor one part over another, usually falling for what ever part was presented to me!!! I've always loved everything about women, except when you make them mad!!! Look out!!!..........Patrick

Darlene De Beaulieu March 18, 2018 at 5:23 PM Hello Pat,at that time it was an embarrassed moment for you. Have a nice evening my friend. Pat Adams March 19, 2018 at 4:06 PM Hello Darlene, and yes I was very shy and stuffed full of hormones so it was extremely awkward!....Be well...pat

Ilene Bauer March 18, 2018 at 5:05 PM ha! i can just picture that scene, pat! how young and innocent you were! i agree with tom - it's interesting how certain things just stick in our minds long after the fact... Pat Adams March 19, 2018 at 4:05 PM Absolutely, with the female experiences being by far the most memorable! (The weaker sex?!? Who ever made that up?)..........Thanks for commenting Ilene!......Pat

Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2018 at 4:18 PM - Embarrassed and red like a tomato :)))) - Fun poem, Pat - // Anne-Lise :) Pat Adams March 19, 2018 at 4:02 PM Yes, I suppose so. I was on the inside of it but I don't know how it could not have been quite red!.....80)

Tom Cunningham March 18, 2018 at 3:49 PM Haha, That was brilliant, I could just picture the scene, funny how those little gems stay in your mind. Tom Pat Adams March 19, 2018 at 4:00 PM Thanks Tom. That's true, especially since many times I can't remember the name of a movie I watched yesterday!..80)

Line Gauthier March 18, 2018 at 3:20 PM Sounds pretty memorable, Pat. Well penned. Pat Adams March 18, 2018 at 3:41 PM Thanks Line, Yeah, it was!