Thorns Beauty Brings

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couplets 9 lines representing a cloud under the thorns that draw blood

Rose exquisitely you colour my every wish silken touches jewels When a dream comes true from the flames blushing petals Sweetest dove loving cotton shades the warmness blue crowns baby hues Heaven's aura circles Beholding from a heart it's fragrance lingers kissed moistly by the foggy dew

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White Wolf

Date: 6/6/2017 12:30:00 PM

The title alone is exquisite! Then the following poetry below! Awesome, Liam! One of the Irish words I know is "Fili" and a bard you are! I saw Mystic's poem about you, so thought I'd see for myself! And I was not disappointed! Beautifully written

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2017 2:53:00 AM

- A beautiful picture in your lines, Liam - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/1/2017 4:39:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet passionate n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^