couplets 9 lines representing a cloud under the thorns that draw blood
Rose exquisitely you colour my every wish silken touches jewels When a dream comes true from the flames blushing petals Sweetest dove loving cotton shades the warmness blue crowns baby hues Heaven's aura circles Beholding from a heart it's fragrance lingers kissed moistly by the foggy dew
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