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Thorns

THORNS I walk naked among the thorns of life waiting to breathe in a sweetened spice Scratched and bruised I overcame, and remained patient just the same. A wary glimpse, and I remember, The moment felt in mid September The white flecked red rose so purely born cannot beguile or more adorn its symmetry. Ah sweet smell, my sense allows a perfumed mist to thus arouse a quick moment, an abductee of jealous fading reverie. I wonder if, do you suppose, That life is like the white flecked rose? CAK 11-07-2012

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Date: 12/13/2022 12:57:00 AM
it's bitter realistic poem; I enjoyed the poetic thought much
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Date: 8/29/2016 11:32:00 PM
Another amazing write, no words, just enjoy the flow and tone of the poetry.
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Date: 4/28/2016 2:01:00 PM
Disturbing at the Start but otherwise, Good Poem!
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Allan Koven
Date: 4/28/2016 4:47:00 PM
Elliot, read my poem "sixth sense" about a tree.
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Allan Koven
Date: 4/28/2016 4:39:00 PM
Elliot, it's metaphorical and existential as are many of my poems Thanks for responding.
Date: 2/18/2016 5:07:00 PM
Yes I do lol, life can be much like that. Keep looking for those roses regards naive ps ace write
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Allan Koven
Date: 2/18/2016 5:28:00 PM
One of the first poems I wrote. The smells, the extraordinary beauty and then a memory. Glad you liked it. Allan
Date: 1/30/2016 9:13:00 PM
This is a very sweet poem.
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Allan Koven
Date: 1/31/2016 10:46:00 AM
Not quite sure what "sweet" refers to, however thank you for commenting. Allan

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