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Thisclose To Nirvana

This
Close to
Nirvana
Your kiss takes me
Your touch is the epitome of bliss
For it makes my heart sing hallelujah!
So bewitching
Your bright smile
It thrills
Me



Tetractys This Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: charles messina (Winner: 2nd Place)
Date written and posted: 04/27/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:49 PM
Lovely theme you chose, close to Nirvana. Congrats for the win.
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 6:01 PM
Thank you, Andrea:-)
Y. Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Hi Edward, You penned such a well written and romantic write. Congrats on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:15 PM
Thank you, Alexis:-)
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 8:12 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Edward :)
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-)
Messina Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Awesome write, Edward. Love this one. So many excellent writes in this contest, yours included. Congratulations on your win. Blessings...Charlie
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Thank you so much for placing my poem, Charles:-) I'm honored.
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