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This Week's Epitaph

A child of God, Dane Smith-Johnsen,
From dawn to dusk, no longer diets.
She finally lost weight –
By returning to dust in the end.

© November 14, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen

Copyright © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen | Year Posted 2010

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/27/2010 4:51:00 AM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/25/2010 10:48:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/25/2010 8:57:00 AM Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in Andrea's cool contest with this awesome epitaph.. great words .. so wonderful ... enjoy with luv.. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/25/2010 8:44:00 AM This was very clever, Dane Ann! Congratulations on your winning epitaph! Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 10/25/2010 6:49:00 AM Congrats on your win Dane Ann in the contest. Harry Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/25/2010 6:43:00 AM Congratulations, Dane Ann. Just think, at some point you won't have to diet anymore. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/25/2010 5:22:00 AM Congratulations on this well deservedn win , Dane Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 10/25/2010 5:07:00 AM Congrats, Dane Ann.Excellent. Nice going. Ralph Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 10/25/2010 1:50:00 AM Dane, congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest ;) Wilma Login to Reply

Thvia Shetley Date: 10/24/2010 10:57:00 PM congrats on the contest, well done! Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 10/24/2010 9:40:00 PM oh my my-- I just read Andrea's comment below-- Andrea I think that was the end-date for your contest??? not THE date -- heaven forbid please!! -- oops sorry Dane-- congrats on your win in Andrea's contest :) this sure was a witty epitaph :) -- nikko :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/24/2010 9:25:00 PM ooh, yikes, I just noticed that date there. Hope it's not something prophetic and related to your epitaph!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/24/2010 9:23:00 PM I just really liked this one a lot, Dane Ann. It reminds me of what I'll feel when I die and don't have to worry about stupid weight gain anymore. Congratulations on your win in my contest. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 10/24/2010 9:15:00 PM thats about the only diet that is going to work for me too I think, congrats on your win in the contest Dane Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/20/2010 9:21:00 PM That's hysterical, Dane Ann! It was nice talking to you last weekend. Wish you had time to stop by the Soup more often, but I know you're busy. Please offer some prayers for my high school friend Barbara. She had her sixth spinal surgery today. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/15/2010 2:58:00 AM Blessing Dane. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/14/2010 10:09:00 AM awww PIXIE DUST!!!! Glad you're home! Please leave me a blog comment. We'll talk soon! Love's Ya Login to Reply