Kash Poet Poet Senryu

This Valentine's Day

my first love letter
           you refused it long ago....
                       a bleeding numb heart


you kept me waiting
         at the closed door of your heart....
                                     an eternal wait


my last love letter
          please open the door just once....
                                 this Valentine's Day





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Dinda Minardi March 4, 2012 at 7:15 AM Congratulations again, Kash! this is very sweet :)

Carol Sunshine Brown March 4, 2012 at 6:17 AM Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Kash. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 4, 2012 at 3:06 AM Congratulations on your win Kash, well done, and for all your recent wins in case I have missed any xxooxx

Poet Destroyer A March 3, 2012 at 9:48 PM KASH, CongratS with your wonderful entry IN Olajide Adelana CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

David Williams March 3, 2012 at 1:51 PM Kash congrats on your HM, I love this..David

Nette Onclaud January 22, 2012 at 8:25 PM how you entice me , kashi buddy... lots of sugary cheers to you for a dazzling win! :) huggs

Gwendolen Song January 21, 2012 at 7:11 AM Great Lovey Dovey poem...you are a patient lover it seeeeems..Congrats on this yet another fine win. Gwendolen

Lizanne Scholtz January 21, 2012 at 4:40 AM Congratulations on your win, loved it, Elizabeth

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2012 at 8:55 PM Aha, you used a winner from last year at this same time. Way to GO, Kash. You are getting wise to the ways of the contests and it was a great pleasure to review this one again By the way, I included a glossary of the meanings of all my slang in my 80's poem. I hope it helps you understand the poem completely. Normal americans did not talk that way, but all americans used a few of those expressions!

Sadaf Syed January 20, 2012 at 11:53 AM Congrats on your win:)

Carol Sunshine Brown January 20, 2012 at 11:50 AM Congratulations on your win Kash. Love, Carol

Debra Squyres January 20, 2012 at 11:39 AM Congrats on your win. This one is different...It's almost like a plea.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 20, 2012 at 9:47 AM congrats kash on a terrific win for this loving poetry my friend.. awesome as usual...luv

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:43 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Kashinath. Love, Carol

Deirdre Omaidin February 18, 2011 at 8:07 AM I rate this very high, lovely flow, congrats, Déirdre

Michael J. Falotico February 18, 2011 at 4:54 AM WOW, I really love your feelings expressed in this ...congrats my dear on your win...always Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 18, 2011 at 12:04 AM Many Congrats Kashinath for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 11:40 PM Beautiful Senryu. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert A. Dufresne February 17, 2011 at 4:37 PM sentimental for sure Kashinath! Touching. Congratulations on your fine win

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 1:59 PM Congratulations, it is nice seeing you winning the contests,Kash. My goal was to see the winners and then race home!But I am staying too long here.

Wilma Neels February 17, 2011 at 10:00 AM Quite sentimental Kashinath and I absolutely love it.. So happy to see this one on the winner's list.. Congratulations to you ;-) Wilma

Sharon Ruebel February 17, 2011 at 9:42 AM Kashinath, Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is a beautiful poem with a very deep message As Always, Shar

Audrey Haick February 17, 2011 at 9:30 AM Wonderful and very heart touching, Kashinath! My congratulations on the fine 3rd Place win in the contest. Enjoy it! Love, Annalise

Nette Onclaud February 16, 2011 at 8:56 PM amazing write, kashi... big whooo dor the fine win! :) hugggs, nette

Tahera Mannan February 16, 2011 at 7:50 PM This sure read like a winner. Many congrats for this huge win.

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