Kim Rodrigues Poet Lento

Notes About The Poem

I met my wonderful husband on Valentine’s day!

This Valentine of Mine

Bliss - clouded windows of blue sky
Kiss my parted lips with moon shine
Miss me as the door divides us
This valentine of mine is so fine

Brand me yours, with a golden ring
Hand in hand we whisper our vows
Withstand anything together, dear
Husband and wife as long as time allows

1/17/2017

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Bawa Talwar April 10, 2017 at 6:24 PM Its so beautiful.The moon the kiss and a husband says it all.nicely crafted Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2017 at 7:54 PM Thank you, Bawa! Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2017 at 7:54 PM Thank you, Bawa!

Bawa Talwar April 10, 2017 at 6:23 PM Its so beautiful.The moon the kiss and a husband says it all.nicely crafted

Bawa Talwar April 10, 2017 at 6:23 PM Its so beautiful.The moon the kiss and a husband says it all.nicely crafted

Anisha Dutta February 6, 2017 at 11:42 AM Congrats Kim to win on wonderful poem n wonderful husband on Valentine's Day Kim Rodrigues February 6, 2017 at 12:31 PM Thank you, Anisha! :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores February 4, 2017 at 10:14 PM Congratulations Kim on the placement of the contest. Kim Rodrigues February 4, 2017 at 11:25 PM Thank you, Nayda!

Maurice Yvonne January 22, 2017 at 7:57 AM A Fav. Nuff said... Kim Rodrigues February 4, 2017 at 11:25 PM Thank you! :)

Afzal Nusker January 18, 2017 at 11:23 PM It's really nice to see when love blossoms into a life long marriage. Wonderful poem and the form, Kim. Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2017 at 11:24 PM Thank you, Afzal!

Afolabi Muideen January 18, 2017 at 6:45 AM I love this post of yours. Thank for sharing. Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2017 at 7:08 AM Thank you, Afolabi! Afolabi Muideen January 18, 2017 at 6:48 AM Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2017 at 5:46 AM - Lovely written in a romantic poem, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2017 at 6:15 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise! Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2017 at 6:15 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise!