This Tranquility

This Tranquility
    by Amy Swanson




shimmers of light 

                  heaven soft ... 



sparkling stardances

                   moonlit mist ...



                                                      *do you remember*


echoes ...

       (oh so faint)

                   of far away

                                  yesterdays

                                         in my soul's memory




*Glittering*


          *dream-dust*


                        violet *iridescence*


                                        falling new

                            
                                                  re-awakening


                                                       my spirit


                                                   to dream again...


                                              within this ageless garden


                                                     simplicity's oasis

        

Silver-soft

           cascade ...

                  mystic waterfall
 
                             hues of rainbowed light

                                       sun-drenched prisms

                                                       crystalline pure

                                                                   flow down

                                                                          from heaven's realms

~ melting ~

         into this rushing river

                            of my soul...
                  
                                           my
                           
                                                  self...

                                                           with waves of blissful peace



Listen close-!

             serenity's song -- 

 

only the heart 

     can hear

          these gentle strains ... 



                                 melodious enchantment


                                           harmonious 


                                                joyous



Lush forest green -

                   life, alive


                                Warm marigold glow -

                                                    sunshine, envelopes



... all becoming 

                         this tranquility.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/19/2009 12:03:00 AM
A sequenced haiku Amy.ver good.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:44:00 PM
This is so wonderfully form and written..Just simply a lovely write to read..Such talent flowing from your pen. Thanks for the comments today on my poem..greatly appreciated.
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:38:00 PM
This is lovely, it seems to float...cloud-like, till the end. Leaves one peaceful. ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:16:00 PM
Great structure, this poem just freefalls. Great imagery in the lines...Raul
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:12:00 PM
Beautiful thought and imagery, free verse is a good choice for this one. Gives the peaceful feeling of standing maybe by the ocean at night, on a clear night and feel the breeze on the face. Peaceful, I like it. Thanks for sharing, Judy Riley
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