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This Tranquility

This Tranquility by Amy Swanson shimmers of light heaven soft ... sparkling stardances moonlit mist ... *do you remember* echoes ... (oh so faint) of far away yesterdays in my soul's memory *Glittering* *dream-dust* violet *iridescence* falling new re-awakening my spirit to dream again... within this ageless garden simplicity's oasis Silver-soft cascade ... mystic waterfall hues of rainbowed light sun-drenched prisms crystalline pure flow down from heaven's realms ~ melting ~ into this rushing river of my soul... my self... with waves of blissful peace Listen close-! serenity's song -- only the heart can hear these gentle strains ... melodious enchantment harmonious joyous Lush forest green - life, alive Warm marigold glow - sunshine, envelopes ... all becoming this tranquility.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 2/19/2009 12:03:00 AM
A sequenced haiku Amy.ver good.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:44:00 PM
This is so wonderfully form and written..Just simply a lovely write to read..Such talent flowing from your pen. Thanks for the comments today on my poem..greatly appreciated.
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:38:00 PM
This is lovely, it seems to, till the end. Leaves one peaceful. ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:16:00 PM
Great structure, this poem just freefalls. Great imagery in the lines...Raul
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:12:00 PM
Beautiful thought and imagery, free verse is a good choice for this one. Gives the peaceful feeling of standing maybe by the ocean at night, on a clear night and feel the breeze on the face. Peaceful, I like it. Thanks for sharing, Judy Riley
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