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this trail of words

Had they left this trail of words Leading to a shadow Concealing a mystery As a challenge Perhaps A map-less guide To an unknown horizon Peeking over a surprised sunrise Maybe an invitation To an unscheduled celebration A moment of awakening Dancing atop a pointed moon Awash in a midnight surf A wrinkled paper Scribbled upon By life.

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Paul Willason

Date: 2/23/2024 3:40:00 AM

A fascinating riddle where words become mere reflections of ones own phantoms ....interesting poem John...in the end I simply enjoyed the play of words waltzing around meaning. You aiway work the brain....

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/21/2024 7:31:00 PM

I enjoyed the trail in your poem. There are mysteries and awakenings. It generates my thoughts.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/21/2024 6:19:00 PM

Penetrating imagery, my friend. Thanks, gw

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/21/2024 5:38:00 PM

A thought-provoking read, my friend. My life sometimes seems like 'a wrinkled paper scribbled on. Have a wonderful day, John.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/21/2024 4:26:00 PM

sometimes my trail of words leads to that shadowy mystery to which you refer. I feel like I'm journeying with a mapless guide to that unknown horizon you mentioned. This poem is deeper than it looks and I enjoyed reading it. Have a great evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/21/2024 10:31:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with a great ending This is just what I needed to read. Love It... FAV for me... Have a blessed day writing away............

Lin Lane

Date: 2/21/2024 7:25:00 AM

I've heard what happens to the best laid plans. Life doesn't always go as planned, and I've gotten lost more than once trying to follow a map, a rule, an invitation. I'd rather find my way to the top of the moon. What a place to write poetry, but I'd not leave a trail of my words for others to follow. Maybe I'll make paper planes of them and send them to Earth. Your thoughts always take me to places I'd never dream of being able to go. Great stuff, John.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/21/2024 5:18:00 AM

Dear John, What a captivating exploration of life's journey, beautifully expressed through imagery and metaphor. Your poem evokes a sense of wonder and curiosity, inviting readers to ponder the mysteries hidden within our own paths. A great reflection on the twists and turns of existence. - Blessings, Daniel