this trail of words

Had they left this trail of words
Leading to a shadow
Concealing a mystery
As a challenge
Perhaps
A map-less guide
To an unknown horizon
Peeking over a surprised sunrise
Maybe an invitation
To an unscheduled celebration
A moment of awakening
Dancing atop a pointed moon
Awash in a midnight surf
A wrinkled paper
Scribbled upon
By life.

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Date: 2/23/2024 3:40:00 AM
A fascinating riddle where words become mere reflections of ones own phantoms ....interesting poem John...in the end I simply enjoyed the play of words waltzing around meaning. You aiway work the brain....
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Date: 2/21/2024 7:31:00 PM
I enjoyed the trail in your poem. There are mysteries and awakenings. It generates my thoughts.
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Date: 2/21/2024 6:19:00 PM
Penetrating imagery, my friend. Thanks, gw
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Date: 2/21/2024 5:38:00 PM
A thought-provoking read, my friend. My life sometimes seems like 'a wrinkled paper scribbled on. Have a wonderful day, John.
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Date: 2/21/2024 10:31:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with a great ending This is just what I needed to read. Love It... FAV for me... Have a blessed day writing away............
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Date: 2/21/2024 7:25:00 AM
I've heard what happens to the best laid plans. Life doesn't always go as planned, and I've gotten lost more than once trying to follow a map, a rule, an invitation. I'd rather find my way to the top of the moon. What a place to write poetry, but I'd not leave a trail of my words for others to follow. Maybe I'll make paper planes of them and send them to Earth. Your thoughts always take me to places I'd never dream of being able to go. Great stuff, John.
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Date: 2/21/2024 5:18:00 AM
Dear John, What a captivating exploration of life's journey, beautifully expressed through imagery and metaphor. Your poem evokes a sense of wonder and curiosity, inviting readers to ponder the mysteries hidden within our own paths. A great reflection on the twists and turns of existence. - Blessings, Daniel
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