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This Time of Year

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Beside the sea I stand alone The water speaks in undertone There’s in the air melancholy I stand alone beside the sea. The sky is veiled in shades of grey My frame of mind in disarray This train of thoughts has been derailed In shades of grey the sky is veiled. This time of year I think of you Your presence missed, and then on cue Emotions spill with every tear I think of you this time of year. - - - - - - - - - - - - © 26th June 2020

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/12/2020 7:24:00 PM

Certain things trigger certain memories. Beautifully written, Paul :)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/15/2020 11:31:00 AM

So true, Angela! I often turn to memories for inspiration. Thank you for reading and commenting. Regards // paul

John Hamilton

Date: 7/23/2020 6:20:00 AM

Well done Paul, I felt every word, this form is very intriguing I must try it one day!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/24/2020 12:35:00 AM

Thank you, John. Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/4/2020 10:10:00 AM

Hi Paul, dear friend, your sentiments are profound in this write, you pull at the readers heartstrings, a very touching poem, composed with your usual talented creativity. Warm regards and hugs, Jenny.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2020 9:59:00 AM

Thank you for all your generous and delightful comments, Jenny. Hope you're enjoying a lovely weekend. ~ Warm regards & hugs, my friend // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/27/2020 4:36:00 AM

A great mastery in the composition of so deep sentiments in splendid images! Straight to the heart of a reader! Great poetry, Paul! And a great pleasure to read! My deepest regards and blessings.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/27/2020 3:39:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Besma. Your critique and insightful comments too are a pleasure to read! Warm regards & Blessings // paul

Michael Tor

Date: 6/26/2020 10:34:00 PM

Heartfelt and touching Paul, nicely written my friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/27/2020 3:34:00 PM

Pleased you like it, Michael; thank you. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/26/2020 5:16:00 PM

So well written and executed, Paul! Enjoyed the flow of your words.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/27/2020 3:33:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely remarks, Vijay. ~ Regards // paul